Great post!

i love this- the idea of holiday stacking!!! so awesome!!! Katy Bowman would call it “movement snacking”!!! 🙂

Another great post – this made me laugh!

Like this hook. “Keep up your chops” is specific and evocative. Focuses on the competence you’ve gained, rather than feelings of guilt and shame for not practicing.

I love this. Yes, it flows wonderfully. Well done!

For me, a hook would be : “A “show up and shoot” approach to brand photography is inadequate to produce photos that connect with clients.” Having had at least 3 brand photoshoots already, this sentence would stop me in my tracks and I would like to keep reading.

Possible hook: Coaches, is your brand photo shoot a crap shoot?

I love what you are offering.
I keep having problems w/ the opening line. I feel I can have confidence about showing up on social media, networking or on stage, and GET the contracts they dream about, and still have a lousy website.
Maybe something like “For female consultants who are showing up on social media, networking or on stage, and w…Read More

Is your website sabotaging your business confidence?

Can’t wait to see the next version. Great feedback @danbadassity-com, @bodymindhypnoticgmail-com and @socialdanielaborgialli-com

I think I would be more direct in the hook. How about using the one that is on the handout (I think this was you?) “To People That Want to Feel Fulfilled But Don’t Know How to Get Started “

I apologize, I don’t understand the example, “I feel I must be in the gift of myself”. This sentence doesn’t make sense to me personally. Is there supposed to be a comma or some other grammatical marker in this sentence. In the alternative is there another example of a limiting belief you can use from a client or somewhere else.

I’ve been trying to translate “I feel I must be in the gift of myself” to french! IS this an expression? or are we talking about deservedness? worthiness?

i can make between 2-5 thursday…

I love it Ruth ! Now I am curious to see the piece you write on it 🙂

I love this too!!!! Can this be a piece in itself??? I want to make a list too now!

Great first draft. Just a little clean up to the last paragraph./
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One other suggestion. Let’s have fun and learn how to slay dressing in a way that does not represent the true YOU. I would remove does not, and speak in the affirmative. Dress in a way that REPRESENTS the TRUE YOU!

HI @melani-alcaino16gmail-com – is the problem they buy clothes that hang in their closet unworn? (b/c hang in you closet by itself is confusing to. me). And if that is the case (seems as it is), then this title needs to connected with the overall message. As it is now, it doesn’t. But I would make it read something like this: For People Who Want…Read More

I like it, but I would change this part to a positive statement: “slay dressing in a way that does not represent the true YOU.” P.S.: I just saw that someone posted above.

I am thinking of Shannon saying, don’t give the how. What about, what if you could shift your mornings turned from arguing and bribing to (what self regulated looks like, instead of the word)….