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Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 12 months ago

Feedback welcome. This one is for my Gutsy Women Finances community.

Here’s a major reason why you continue to struggle with money, even though you have a decent income.

You weren’t taught a thing about how to manage your money growing up. Now you don’t know where to start and you haven’t found anyone you can really trust to guide you o…Read More

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- Annette Presley
  1 year, 12 months ago
  
  I like it. But, there is a disconnect for me between the quiz and the community. You say this is for your Gutsy community but then you start the story with the quiz and the CTA is about taking the quiz, not joining a community. There isn’t any context for the community when you talk about it in the story. I would say this piece is about getting…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thanks Annette. Perhaps the key is to work on two separate pieces – quiz and community. I’ll see what I can work up.
- Shannon
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Brenda – great job diving in and taking action. Woohoo!
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  Hi Brenda,
  I love the opening.
  And I think you have a wonderful story about Madison & the club.
  Did Madison take the quiz before or after she joined Gutsy Women Club? Your mention of some of the things you did w/ her made me curious. Are the exercises and your instructions part of the Club something different? What do I get from the club if I…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 11 months ago
    
    Thanks, Joel. I’m going to separate the quiz from the GWF community. That should make things a whole lot clearer.
Annette Presley

• 1 year, 12 months ago

would love some feedback. Is it compelling?

Here is a key reason your hormones are behaving badly, even though you are eating a healthy diet and taking DIM.

Your minerals are out of whack. You have too much iron and not enough copper.
What do I mean by that?

None of us wants to bust our butt at the gym, eat kale, and take a boatload of…Read More

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- Brenda Uekert
  1 year, 12 months ago
  
  taking DIM? It’s a powerful story. Not sure you need this at the end – (which are BIG issues costing you time, money, joy, and your sanity). You’ve unearthed those pieces in your story.
  - Annette Presley
    1 year, 12 months ago
    
    Thanks! I’ll take that out. DIM is a common supplement, but I might need to think of something else to put there.
- JoelElfman
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  instead of taking DIM, you can just mention supplements in general. Plus, DIM & DM are somewhat similar, someone skimming might not pay enough attention.
Brenda Uekert

• 1 year, 12 months ago

I’d love some feedback on this:

Here’s a major reason why you keep starting the new year under a cloud of money worries.

You’re getting sucked into the holiday shopping frenzy and you’re not planning ahead.

Let me explain. None of us wants to start the new year feeling like it will take forever just to “catch up” from our holiday…Read More

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- Annette Presley
  1 year, 12 months ago
  
  I like this a lot. I just have a few suggestions for tightening it a bit.
  
  This isn’t a big deal but I don’t think the question mark works. “Yet each November, you get geared up for Black Friday and all the super discounts. Maybe you’re even hunting down deals before you carve into the Thanksgiving turkey and before you know it, you’ve got p…Read More
  - Brenda Uekert
    1 year, 12 months ago
    
    Wow, Annette! Thanks so much. I made the changes.
    - Annette Presley
      1 year, 12 months ago
      
      You’re welcome!
AimeeRussell

• 2 years ago

My thought leader content…
Does this make you feel like buying?

Here is the key reason why your hair is dull and lifeless even though you take care of your hair with quality hair products.

It’s because you have metal and mineral build-up and your hair could use a detox!

It’s frustrating to spend lots of money on quality, pro…Read More

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- Brenda Uekert
  1 year, 12 months ago
  
  Aimee, Not sure I’d go into the specific elements. And I’m not sure how your product can counteract the water issue. I really have no idea what goes into a hair detoxing session, but maybe your audience does?
  - AimeeRussell
    1 year, 12 months ago
    
    Thank you so much Brenda! I appreciate your feedback. I plan to use an image with the minerals and metals that are most harmful to the hair with a small explanation of the damage they cause to the hair. As well as a before and after photo of a client’s detox session. I would love to hear your thoughts on those visuals.
- Annette Presley
  1 year, 12 months ago
  
  I agree with Brenda about not using the specific elements. Do you have a story about someone who did the detox and how fabulous their hair was?
  
  For the first sentence I’d say, “Here is the key reason your hair is dull and lifeless even though you use high quality hair products.”
  
  “You have heavy metal and mineral build-up.”
  
  What do I mean by…Read More
  - AimeeRussell
    1 year, 12 months ago
    
    This is soooooo helpful, thank you so much Annette. I prefer short and swet, but I’m learning that it doesn’t need to be like that all the time.
    - Annette Presley
      1 year, 12 months ago
      
      You’re welcome!
BethShenton

• 2 years ago

Missing today’s session, look forward to diving in next week 🙂

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- Shannon
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  We missed you! <3
DonnaDube

• 2 years ago

Sorry I have to miss the session today, November 2nd, but will for sure check the recording and be ready for next week! Looking forward to it!

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- Shannon
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  We missed you Donna! <3
JulianneMiller, AFC®

• 2 years ago

Feedback please on my bio for my website. Doing some clean up.
Julianne Miller is an Accredited Financial Counselor who is qualified to help you overcome the stress of living paycheck to paycheck and get you on the path to reach your next goals. She has worked with both sole proprietors and women individually to help them overcome their…Read More

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- Brenda Uekert
  2 years ago
  
  I’d change it to first person. From “she” to “I”. First sentence – I am an Accredited Financial Counselor who helps women overcome … Make it stronger. Be bolder. What makes you different? Is there some reason you became a financial counselor?
  - JulianneMiller, AFC®
    2 years ago
    
    Very helpful, thank you. I have been trying to lead with Daring lately but didn’t apply that here. I’ll rethink this some. I appreciate the feedback!
    - Brenda Uekert
      2 years ago
      
      Daring is a good word. Keep it front and center.
      
      JulianneMiller, AFC®
      2 years ago
      
      Definitely!
    - Brenda Uekert
      2 years ago
      
      You just prompted me to update my bio on my website. I’m taking all the reins off. Sharing it in case it inspires you.
      
      I have a box of letters. Old hand-written tear-stained letters written to a dear friend decades ago.
      
      Those letters take me back to a time when I was barely getting by. I wrote about:
      
      – Scoring 20 cent packages of ramen noodles…Read More
      
      JulianneMiller, AFC®
      2 years ago
      
      Wow, that’s much more involved than mine. I revamped AND sent it off but it’s still not so involved. I really need to rethink some more. Thank you for your help. Detail, that seems to be the key.
      
      Brenda Uekert
      2 years ago
      
      I’ve had more generic versions, and I’m just laying it all out there now. Whether it’s the best way to go remains to be seen. Do what feels right to you.
AmyHager

• 2 years ago

Who has used their 9 Word Emails? Come to class on Wed with something sent/posted so we can talk about the results and next steps. 🙂

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- BethShenton
  2 years ago
  
  I’m still working on this one, more to share soon 🙂
DanielaBorgialli

• 2 years ago

decided to create a “9 word email” as a social media post – let’s see if i get some love!!!!

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- Shannon
  1 year, 11 months ago
  
  What was the result Daniela?
  - DanielaBorgialli
    1 year, 11 months ago
    
    a lot cheering and agreeing with me but no new leads or people actually biting for some lessons – but learned a lot!!! 🙂
MeganCallus

• 2 years ago

Hello everyone. It was suggested that I collect emails at an event where I’ll have a table . It was recommended that I use a QR code. So I went to https://www.qrcode-monkey.com/ and https://app.qr-code-generator.com/create/new/?accountActivated=1 which will let me create a QR code but then how do I use it to collect emails. This t…Read More

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- DanielaBorgialli
  2 years ago
  
  the qr code should take the person to your website ? or to a landing page? where they will fill out the form so you can collect their info – does that help??/
  - AmyHager
    2 years ago
    
    This is totally how it works
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