“Tame your wild hormones” is a how – it’s not something I know I want.

Maybe change up “If you are…” to “Are you…” so the reader seems more engaged and giving you yesses along the way.

Again in the benefits, causing my hormones to behave badly is a how. Foods and habits causing sleeplessness, brain fog, irritability… those are things I…Read More

Re: “Tame your wild hormones” – i hear what @karen is saying above about it being a “how” and yet – so many of us hear “it’s your hormones” – I think it has become common vernacular for women to blame “everything” on their “hormones”. I like it!!! Maybe it’s at the end – you will help them “tame them”….

I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More

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Diana – I have been thinking about wasters and stealers for several days!!! Not sure if you’ve chosen one – but I’m opting on “wasters”. – I feel like I want to steal more time to do things but I know that I waste time doing things that are distracting or?
maybe this helps???

I think either works, but I like stealers better because waster implies that the person is wasting time rather than the activity taking up their time so they can’t do more important things.

I don’t know if this works better or not, but what about 10x productivity for you and your team.

And I would put 9 time stealers instead of 9 sabateurs at the end.

At first, I liked saboteur best, but when I checked the definition, it signified that a person does an action deliberately. For your workshop, I would probably go with waster. While the persons are active, they concentrate on the wrong activities.

Whoops. Is it compelling? Anything you don’t like?

I agree with Joel that I think it comes out harsher than kinder. The first section especially comes out strong. Paragraph 3 & 4 seem very personal so I think they need to change some. Instead of saying you were “getting away with it”, make this more about your clients at the time. Something along the lines of “My system was meant to help my…Read More