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    Dan Lewis

    4 months, 2 weeks ago

    Looking for thoughts and feedback on my lead magnet title. Does it attract and resonate with you / or not?

    “Visual Charisma for Coaches”

    The subtitle is”Elevate your online authority, 
attract next-level clients, 
connect more deeply, 
and create more impact 
(without being fake or sales-y)”

    Here’s the link to the download page: https://www.badassity.com/visual-charisma

    Thanks!

    Dan

    6 Comments
    • My first reaction was ‘what is visual charisma?’ I thought maybe it’s how you look or something about visualization. When I went to the landing page, I saw that it’s about your brand photos, but nothing in the name or subtitle indicates that. So, if you are wanting to attract people who are looking for brand photo info, I feel like you might need a clearer title. Maybe something like “7 Ways To Attract More Clients With Your Brand Photos.”

    • I am intrigued by the concept of “visual charisma” and it made me want to keep reading. Your explanations were clear and helped me understand possible areas my current materials may not be as effective and good as they could be! I like the idea of getting info in the download to help me understand and assess to see if I do need help.

    • Same thoughts as Annette, wasn’t sure what Visual Charisma is. And doesn’t quite feel like it links to your lead magnet offering. So maybe “Using Visual Charisma to elevate your Coaching Authority” or indicating that it’s about using the visual charisma for the results. Great title suggestion by Annette

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Dan Lewis

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