Yay, I used that idea of interoducing I believ in my live today, then introduced myself

What a beautiful post! Love the graphic – and look at that engagement! https://www.facebook.com/danielaborgialli/posts/pfbid07iCbCd9aBgYKHf6EECH9jEe7tRLcME5QKcuLvRy2cdK7aJRDkTVsyFjTjmeiDWBgl

Gorgeous! Maybe consider putting Expansion last in the list or changing “grows” to “nurtures.” (Sounds a little like you’re expanding your academy otherwise–but doesn’t have the same connotation at the end of your inspiring list.) Great work–pithy and energetic!

so fun working together-

I have not completed mine, but will place it on LinkedIn for starters.

This is great as is and you can run with it. If you want to take it a level deeper – what else can you say besides “classes, workshops, retreats”. What are 3 steps (that are an experience and can tap into emotion and the results ) that people will go through instead of “classes, workshops, retreats” for your second line about bodies can learn.

This is terrific.

I would move “We believe in creating dancers not just students.” Maybe as the 2nd statement. It is simple, beautiful & clear.

The learning statement I think can be written in slightly 2 different versions.
1. – We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango. Classes, workshops, retreats, and cultural immersions all ser…Read More

I would change the second one: We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango for practice, growth, improvement and self-expression.