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Will you invite friends to the May 22 email marketing workshop? Here is something you can use:
I have been working on my email marketing strategy and would love for you to join me with my email marketing mentors, Shannon and Amy, on May 22nd. They will be mapping out the 4 steps of your organic Joy Fueled™ Marketing Plan. This plan has helped…Read More
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LCT Welcome Letter Draft 2.
Hello there!
At the Wulfden, we strive to bring kindness and acceptance to every aspect of our business and community. We want to see everyone thrive, so we prioritize giving back through our sphere of influence and are here to support you to do the same. When we work with our clients to simplify their workflows…Read More
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I LOVE the rearranging that you did, it is super helpful. I sometimes struggle with the words and tend to go into the weeds. I appreciate your insight!
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Struggling a bit with the LCT Welcome Letter. I am not keen on the phrase “checklist assessment,” but I am unsure what else to call it. Here is what I have so far:
Hello there!
I’m so happy you found From Tangled Tech to Smooth Systems: Your playbook for evaluating how your software and workflows align with expansion and growth. Let’s dis…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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I like it Carrie. The only thing I would add is… “I hope to speak with you soon!” doesn’t sound like an invitation. (in sales we have to ASK for the order). What’s the next step or action you want them to take after this?
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Hey Carrie, I feel like the connection between your values and the purpose of the resource could be stronger. It took me a few reads to get what you were going for, and I still feel like I’m reading between the lines.
Specifically, I wouldn’t repeat the title in the first sentence. I would use the brass tacks description you have at the end but…Read More
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Topic: How does your prior experience/work/career help to uniquely position what you do?
I’m afraid this one might be too long, and I may have gotten a little soapbox. Would love any feedback.
Subject Line: Unlock My Hidden Talents
Preview Text: How volunteer work shapes exceptional professionals.Hook: Why you shouldn’t discount v…Read More
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I like this piece. Enjoyed learning that about you. I would just like to be clear though, who is your audience?
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SUBJECT: LEAD CONVERSION TOOL
Hi folks!
I’m struggling with my Title and Subtitle for my Lead Conversion Tool for my Level 5 client and I’d love some feedback.
Level 5 client:
* women healthcare professionals
* verging on burnout
* despite doing a”all the things” to stay healthy and happy
* they know something needs to change but they’re…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Hi @annannbecks-co – the ‘reclaim yourself’ subtitle doesn’t resonate with me. It feels murky. I’m not sure what that means. Can you use different wording there? I like the rest of it. The title feels clear and I like that different levels of assessment will lead to different suggestions/outcomes.
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@sarasarafins-com Thank you. Shannon said the same thing. 😊 I struggle with naming things… always better to dialogue with others.
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Reverse your path to Burnout: Get clarity on your ONE next step to reclaim yourself.
i like the title because it reminds me of what could happen…but I agree with sara about the word reclaim. how about changing it to protect?
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Hey Carrie, for some reason the order still feels off to me and it didn’t feel like there was any urgency. Lots of business owners will deprioritize systems until their hair is on fire (IKYK)… so connecting the outcome they want with the work you do and why putting it off is a poor choice feels important.
I pulled the in structure from what…Read More