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Thank you,and thanks for commenting on my post on FB!
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Blair – the post depth and tips are great! And I can tell you know your stuff – and was pleased to be able to tag my friend who is dealing with THIS exact issue. I do want you to test something: leave that post as is and do another one – and put the link in the comment so FB doesn’t block your content. Let’s see if it gets more reach.
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Thank you – I will! I wanted to ask how much time I should leave between value posts, and also if I should try one as a video, since video is my content personality. I won’t be able to make the call tomorrow but hopefully you will see this 🙂
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I would say make that video! Your post was soooo good, I shared it! Maybe your CTA can be, share these tips with your doggie mom friends (We talked about this in our session yesterday. So glad you hung out with your family yesterday) Go create that video!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Hi everyone! It’s Jordyn, client care assistant with The Content Personality® Club. We’re having a little tech issue getting the video recording from last week’s call on September 20th. Until we have it fixed up, please see the call recording for September’s Convert session here:
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FLAP YOUR WINGS reboot:
They never expected THIS to hatch out of their egg!
“If an egg is in your nest, you sit on it and keep it warm. It doesn’t matter whose egg it is.” That’s one of the many lines that brought tears to my eyes.Jeff brought home a copy of P.D. Eastman’s Flap Your Wings from a garage sale when Cole was little. I was excited b…Read More
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Ruth this is awesome!
A couple of small things come to mind
1- referencing the author – I would add a tiny more explanation – “”I was excited because I knew Eastman’s books, Are You…”
2- layout – I might consider putting the NOT – on the same line as Fiddlesticks
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Still thinking of an appropriate question/suggestion. I love the idea of a question, but I also think the aiming and practicing themes are apt. Integrity, loyalty, and non-judgment take a back seat (albeit leaning forward and sometimes tuning the radio) to those we actively teach. Not directly addressing the audience also seems more comfortable…Read More
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Also–I don’t know how to bold text on this platform, but I’ve bolded “THIS,” “NOT,” and “what would make it IMPOSSIBLE.”
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whatever you do to make it stand out more is useful.
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They never expected THIS to hatch out of their egg!
“If an egg is in your nest, you sit on it and keep it warm. It doesn’t matter whose egg it is.” That’s one of the many lines that brought tears to my eyes.
Jeff brought home a copy of P.D. Eastman’s Flap Your Wings from a garage sale when Cole was little. I was excited because I knew of Are Yo…Read More
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@ruthviolincox-net – when I saw this come up on my feed I smiled. Once again, same feedback as before – this is GREAT story telling and insight and example. How does it relate to music or instruments. I think bridging the gap will make it even stronger.
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Amy worked on this quite a bit with me yesterday. Looking forward to finishing the edits and maybe making it into 2 or 3 posts. Thank you!
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Hooks
Van Gogh’s Electrified Face Stopped Me Cold
Has a work of art ever stopped you dead in your tracks?
Have you ever been surprised by joy?
Ever been blind-sided by a work of art?
Ever been mugged by a painting?
Vincent Van Gogh mugged me in broad daylight.
Dare to be vivid.Van Gogh’s Electrified Face
The first painting of the Van Gogh…Read More![]()
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Looking for feedback. Does the feeling come across? Too long?
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@danbadassity-com – these are my two favorite hooks – way to brainstorm MANY and get the ideas flowing: Ever been mugged by a painting?
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@danbadassity-com – as far as the content goes, I loved the entire thing – minus the 2nd paragraph- I actually got lost there, and probably would have not kept reading. But if you take that out, I think it still flows very well and gets the point across. I also wan tot share that there is a way to transiton to the CTA that will really tie it all…Read More
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Thanks, Shannon!
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Posted this revision on LinkedIn today:
Ever been mugged by a work of art?
A couple of weeks ago I went to Chicago’s Art Institute to take in a Van Gogh exhibition. The first painting, a self-portrait, stopped me cold and just wouldn’t let me pass.
Van Gogh’s face was charged, vibrating, buzzing with luminous energy. Each whisker of his…Read More
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I love your post Blair ! I know my dog picks up on my emotions and energy but your post made me realise I still get tense 😉 I ll try breathing slowly next time ! Anyway your post is very clear in identifying the problems and proposed solutions. That should speak to your people surely !