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Nitty Gritty Refocused! Would love feedback!
TO PARENTS WHO WANT THEIR TEENS TO LEARN REAL-WORLD SKILLS SO THEY ARE READY FOR LIFE OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOM:
Would your teens benefit from:
– Building a positive self-image?
– Effective communication skills?
– Strategies to develop resilience?
– Managing his/her emotions?
– Methods to set…Read More3 Comments-
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What part specifically would you like feedback on?
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I’m not sure if this is something you talk about in your work, but what about a result of your teens becoming more independent? For example – managing their own homework, courseload, schedule etc. Maybe that falls under resilience, but I know many parents who feel like they can’t get their teen to take ownership of things. On another note – I am…Read More
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Direct Offer Post–would love feedback! Is it too long? Does it make sense or did I get too wordy? Thanks all!
3 spots left in the new redesigned Imagine Social Group! Is one of them for your child?
Many parents of young children delay seeking outside social skills support for their child for a couple of reasons –
-valid reasons too!
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one question. do your parents say they want help with their parenting skills? If not, rework this line:
It’s okay, take a breath- I’m here to help you calm your nerves, boost your confidence as a parent, all while helping your child get on the right track to more positive social thinking skills in 4 weeks.-
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I agree that this wording sounds better.
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Many parents of young children delay seeking outside social skills support for their child for a couple of reasons –
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I love the picture you painted. Great job! My question is – what age children is the group for? Elementary? Teens? I can tell it’s for younger children but maybe specifying age will help people to self identify with it more.
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Direct Offer Content:
Does your tech and systems look a little bit like this? A little bit of a CRM stuck to your online learning platform. And then we toss in a few spreadsheets, an e-commerce storefront with a project management system. Don’t forget your website too!
And somehow, they all have to play nice together and run your b…Read More
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I like this because in your testimony she says ‘in a few months’ which gives people realistic expectations. Great testimony also because she highlights at the end that she has systems that run without her constantly monitoring and speaks to your offer to streamline systems and build better workflows. Nice job!
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where did you find the toy photo? that is so freaking perfect!
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with that testimonial, you don’t have to use it all. Here is how I would rework it to fit this offer and not confuse your reader. AND I have a question – will you be the one traking KPIs, tasks, etc with this offer? If not… ditch this and start with Together “Today, she tracks KPIs, ensures all tasks are completed by my team, has a list of…Read More
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@amymshannonhernandez-com So that’s a little tricky. I have released that client and no longer work with her. I’m not sure if I can/should reword that testimonial to read in the past tense.
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yes you should. It doesn’t have to be word-for-word exact. And, you don’t have to keep everything because it no longer relates to the work you do.
My question for you (and everyone else reading/thinking this) is this testimony actually saying what you need it to say and does it make sense? Right now, Carrie, as written – it is confusing and takes…Read More-
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I don’t handle the implementation and ongoing maintenance/retainer work. I provide them with the audit blueprint and make recommendations for what needs to be restructured and changed. I can manage the change over, but don’t implement.
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So, is this the best quote to use? OR what doesn’t need to be said?
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I love how you painted the picture at the beginning. I could totally see it!
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Hi All! Looking for feedback on my recent post. I teach mindfulness to school-age kids and stress reduction to teachers. Often, people put my work in the category of yoga, so I took this nitty-gritty detail and wrote a post on it today for LinkedIn. Any feedback will be helpful. Thanks!
Why Mindfulness is yoga and how it’s…Read More
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Love this! So glad you dove into this since this was the feedback you had been given about “doing yoga already.” Also – I would like you to use the word teach instead of present. Do you know why?
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Hi everyone, I was working on my post from yesterdays meeting and would love some feedback…
📣To the parents who want to see their kids happy when they go to school but can’t get them out of bed because of overwhelming anxiety.
💭Instead of arguing and bribing, what would happen if your child was able to independently self-regulate and had a…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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I am thinking of Shannon saying, don’t give the how. What about, what if you could shift your mornings turned from arguing and bribing to (what self regulated looks like, instead of the word)….
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Tracy, you have really grasped this concept. Great advice.
Allison, does the tiny tweak make sense to you? If so, make this a quick post and a maybe a cute image. If could be you with your head hiding under the covers, no one would know.
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Hi Amy! Yes that tiny tweak makes A LOT of sense to me. Thanks for the picture suggestion, I sometimes get hung up on that. Thanks!
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@tracyhelmcc-com Yes that is SO helpful! Thank you so much for your feedback!!
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