My first reaction was ‘what is visual charisma?’ I thought maybe it’s how you look or something about visualization. When I went to the landing page, I saw that it’s about your brand photos, but nothing in the name or subtitle indicates that. So, if you are wanting to attract people who are looking for brand photo info, I feel like you might need…Read More

I am intrigued by the concept of “visual charisma” and it made me want to keep reading. Your explanations were clear and helped me understand possible areas my current materials may not be as effective and good as they could be! I like the idea of getting info in the download to help me understand and assess to see if I do need help.

Same thoughts as Annette, wasn’t sure what Visual Charisma is. And doesn’t quite feel like it links to your lead magnet offering. So maybe “Using Visual Charisma to elevate your Coaching Authority” or indicating that it’s about using the visual charisma for the results. Great title suggestion by Annette

Hey Dan! Because your brand is BADASSITY I was expecting some big bold language in the copy that really stood out. I personally got distracted by the taps in the heading that made me wanted to click away from the lead magnet. I would remove them for your lead magnet. I would break the initial messaging up to something like this: Calling All Bad…Read More

What if you shortened the headline from “Hello, coaches and transformational leaders.
Are your personal brand images commanding attention, building connection, and winning you new clients?” to:

Your coaching can transform lives.
But are your personal brand images commanding attention and building connection to win you new clients?

the first…Read More

@danbadassity-com I like this version so much better than the first. The way you added your color to each slide gave it more visual appeal for me (I’m a visual content person). I am LOVING the way that you broke down the assessment into the colored boxes. It makes it hard to miss. ANd the Name It – Frame It- Play It- slide feels much more on brand…Read More

When I click your download link it takes me to the success page

only suggestion is to perhaps tell us ahead that its the first of a 3 part series to manage our expectations when we get to the end. Also I can see how formatting will help this presentation but overall I like the idea and content

I like it!

Yay! I love these. And I really love this messaging: “There is no one you-er than you.” The subject line for email 1 is too long. REmember, about 5 words max. Otherwise these are great (do need to proofread again). And I LOVE the content you included!

I like the personalization of your subject line, but would rather see the full name of the resources as my preview text.