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I had mentioned in one of the sessions that I was featured in a new LEVANTA online magazine. I am excited to share the link with you: https://issuu.com/design.your.plate.
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BodyHypnosis Signature Program
Are You Operating from Your Best Self?
Create Clarity, Connection & Transformation
– Reduce Stress, Anxiety
– Create More Happiness, Confidence & Ease
– Build New Habits, Beliefs & Ways of Thinking (i.e. Weight Loss, Stop Smoking, Imposter Syndrome and more)
– Make Changes that are Positive, Healthy…Read More2 Comments-
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Hello Joel, I like that you described most of your benefits in a positive way, maybe you could also rewrite the first benefit: Establish More Balance and Calmness (or something similar)? I would move the words around in your CTA: Schedule a Clarity Call, and learn how the 12-week BodyHypnosis Program can improve your life.
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Thanks Kerstin, I’ve changed the CTA and looking at the other changes you suggested. Just sent it off to my web people. I’ll make more changes soon.
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Here is my first draft for the landing page for my three-month beginners course, Learn German Through Art:
Wouldn’t it be great if you could communicate in everyday German?
Learn German Through Art – A German Course Focusing on Everyday Conversations to get you talking with German speakers quickly and confidently
In this interactive c…Read More
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I like this overall Kerstin, short and to the point. I wonder if you could include something that confirms I do not need to be an “artist” to enjoy this course, and also something to encourage me if I know absolutely “no German” now. Just to clarify who this program is for in a bit more detail.
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Great questions, Donna!
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Hello Donna, thanks for the suggestion. While I mention it when I talk about my courses, I should add: Are you worried about your artistic skills? If you can draw stick men, you can participate. I don’t teach you how to draw but how to use visual images that help you to remember new vocabulary.
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I like this a lot. It does feel a little cut & dry. May get a little granular. How does the class have fun. Is there a particular fun exercise that you do, would it be okay to mention something about it. I’m wondering if any of your students have some funny stories about a situation where their conversational skill came in handy. Getting…Read More
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Hello Joel, I appreciate your feedback. With every month of Content Personality Club, I update my website. Karen Joy Fritz had also some great ideas. My website was just relaunched. We are still ironing out issues. I should be able to do my own updates by next week. Therefore, I have not added the September update. Please check it out at…Read More
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Happy to help. Page looks good. The quote on the left is biig, bold, and negative. Can you add more so there is a transformation state at the end “…and now, I easily talk to…”
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Thanks, Joel. It is always a great help to get some fresh eyes to look at your content.
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hello Everyone! (ok here it goes – Landing Page copy draft 1)
1. Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: eight week course for those with little or no experience dancing.
2. Tired of the day to day grind?
Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: begin your journey to relieve your stress and improve your overall health
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I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More-
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Julianne – this is so juicy – and very helpful. I’m going to play some more with it but I really love it! Thank you for that!
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Can’t wait to see the second draft on Wed
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Another tweak. Instead of “Then this is just the beginning!” how about something like Then you need to dance!
Instead of renew your social interactions how about make new friends, laugh, and feel like a human again.
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Zoom zone got you feeling bland? Tango your way to feeling grand!
Enter the zesty world of beginning Argentine Tango and dance your way to balance, flexibility, strength, and endurance in a safe environment to laugh with new people. Argentine Tango – your first step to make exercise FUN!
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This so fun to read!!! lol!!! Thanks for bringing some joy to my tunnel vision!
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Danielle, you have got some great suggestions here. I love how with every comment the piece gets better and better.
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