I think that is a fabulous way to use the commitment statement.

Love this!! Great example! Thanks for sharing with us..

Very succinct. I know what you offer and am glad you didn’t add a bunch of “flowery” words to it. Nicely done.

It’s a wonderful set of statements. I would only change one thing – Are you ready to get your numbers in order for 2022 and set up for success in 2023? (it’s shorter, and you’ve already used “business finance” a couple of times).

I got thrown off by the term “learners.” It suggests that they are already learning. Are you working with those who haven’t yet started learning the German language? I don’t easily pick up languages and I’ve not had great experiences with language teachers. I would want to know that you teach in a fun and supportive manner. That you’ll make it…Read More

I really like the 3rd statement to clients – it feels clear what you do and it feels light.
The 4th client statement – has supportive and support and feels less clear. Maybe something like… “…supportive learning community that upholds values of … ” or “…supportive learning community by offering …. ”
I like the industry statement and of…Read More

Here’s another possibility: I am committed to helping my clients speak German faster and with more confidence by incorporating fun visualization exercises and focusing on conversations.

Your 2nd statement would need the word ‘just’ before the part about kids otherwise it sounds like kids can’t learn the way you teach.

Loaded it onto my main website (About) and landing page.

I posted mine above because I can’t be on this week’s call. I used it in an email to my list (added it to my launch series that is currently going out) and in some SM posts (IG and FB).

Joel – great job! The two that stand out to me are 3 and 4 for public facing. How do you feel about leading with those two?