You have already shared this, correct?

What part specifically would you like feedback on?

I’m not sure if this is something you talk about in your work, but what about a result of your teens becoming more independent? For example – managing their own homework, courseload, schedule etc. Maybe that falls under resilience, but I know many parents who feel like they can’t get their teen to take ownership of things. On another note – I am…Read More

Hook suggestion: TO PARENTS WHO WANT TO BRIDGE THE GAP BETWEEN SCHOOL LESSONS AND REAL-WORLD SKILLS BUT BUT DON’T KNOW WHERE TO START.

This is SO FUCKING CLEAR!!! I also like Dan’s suggestion. Get this posted out into the World.

This is really clear, and really good but this is a lot to read, and to absorb. I would suggest at a minimum bullet points. I would consider if you need all of these at once. Can some be separated (use sub-headers) or just combine some of these?

I like it!

Run with this as is… you did a good job. I really want to work on this HOOK: Want to turn WORRY into PEACE OF MIND?

It is very vague. Any ideas of how to make it more powerful for a parent would stop their school and feel like you are talking directly to them in the very first sentence?

Is this following the framework from our session or any of the recordings?

HI Renee,

I would consider just using “mindset”, foundation for me just make it longer & confusing.

Seems like “own emotional intelligence, self-care, problem solving skills, resilience, goal setting, compassion, and to build healthy relationships” is a lot. I would cut this down, or break it down to more than one sentence.

I would also conside…Read More