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Ok – so i tried to upload my attempt at this month’s messaging here and that didn’t work so i just went for it… – not sure what my block to this task is but here’s my attempt…
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Here’s the Mr. Twinkletoes episode of my podcast, which I mentioned on the call this past week: https://kite.link/CPT65
It’s one of my Creative Pep Talks, which I put out every other week on the podcast. They’re short, off-the-cuff, unedited episodes about a single creative tool or tip. I’ve been doing them for about two and a half years now.
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@norbeckgmail-com – Nancy – such a joy to hear you in action today. I might have a new podcast to tune into. Love that this is off-the cuff, short, and your commentary and insight. love the invitation to be silly and foolish at the end.
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@norbeckgmail-com – also went to your website – and I have some feedback on that, if you are open to it? Let me know 🙂
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That poor website has been reviewed by SO many people that it’s probably gonna have an identity crisis, but sure, why not?
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Direct offer – first draft
I inserted some introductory, positioning copy in the first section. A challenge I’m wrestling with is that I’m more than a photographer; I’m a coach and consultant as well to get the results I get.Step 1: What is your direct offer? We want you to be selling NOW!
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Very compelling!
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@danbadassity-com – the clarity here is great for all section. I am getting hung up on the package title – which is quite long: First Impression Basic Personal Brand Portfolio Package . Titles matter a lot to selling things – think about it like this – what is the result of working with you? Can we rework this title package. For example, we have a…Read More
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Yeah, I’ve been struggling with the title. Focusing on results is helpful.
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Hi, Shannon! I’ve taken a swing at rewriting all my “packages” and giving them more concise names. The challenge is to make each package of services immediately graspable, but also that there’s a progression of fullness. Would you take a look? Thanks!
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Hey everyone! I took a stab at writing an email with the behind the scenes content and I’d love some feedback. I am not sure exactly how to tie in the CTA. I feel like it kind of sneaks up on you and needs a better transition. The topic is Travel and the hook is a question. Thanks!
Here is the email:
Title: How can getting your finances…Read More
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Well done! Neither of your CTAs bothered me. I would have preferred the first one (Want to hear more about that?…) in parentheses, but it works as is. I bet others will have tips about how to smooth those transitions, but to me they worked well.
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Thanks for sharing your love of travel, Sara. I love to travel too! May I make two suggestions?
Get specific and sensory. It’s the little details that spark engagement and presence you. Today I’m thinking back to a trip to Venice we made on our honeymoon. I remember the heat and the orange glow of the molten glass in the glass-blowing workshop on…Read More -
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I see how you feel you have dumped all the engagement at the end. What if you sprinkle it throughout and bold it so people see it.
Title: How can getting your finances organized free you from FOMO?I’m not sure if you know this about me, but I love to travel. I do it any chance that I get. From a weekend spa getaway to a trip to a new city – I’m…Read More
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Love the picture
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hello Nancy!
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