RuthRoland

AmyHager
1 year, 10 months ago

you switch between “we” and “I”. Just wanted to make sure it was intentional.
- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Nope I’ll fix that.
AmyHager
1 year, 10 months ago

Being from a small town and living in one now – your trust statement is right fucking on! How you explained Integrity is very kind. I could see where using Sincerity would be better. Instead of relationships do you use community? or People.
- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Right?! I do like Sincerity better than Integrity. That’s closer to my heart. I really reflected on relationships over the weekend and connection really hits it for me. It’s not only the people that I meet but the next connection that we forge. Some develop into relationships; all are important at some level.
- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  But I’ll need to change the definition on that word then. Not all of that will work
- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  1 year, 10 months ago
  
  Tell me your thoughts on this updated copy:
  Confident- We believe that women should feel confident in understanding and managing their money on their own terms
  Trust–We believe that relationships are built on trust and not on gossip or false stories
  Sincerity-We believe that we all benefit when we’re honest with ourselves and others about our…Read More
  - RuthRoland
    1 year, 10 months ago
    
    These sound good to me, Julianne! Is it important to you that most of your sentences don’t have periods on the end? And I wonder whether the list would be even more effective in a different order. Have you played with the ordering of the middle three?
    - JulianneMiller, AFC®
      1 year, 10 months ago
      
      lol Thanks Ruth, that’s modern vernacular to leave off punctuation (common on social media) but I would normally include the periods. I have not thought about the order; interesting to think about. So I would probably put them in order of the client process then: Trust, Sincerity, Compassion, Confidence, and Connection. I adjusted the words a…Read More
      - RuthRoland
        1 year, 10 months ago
        
        Yes, that’s a good adjustment for the value words. I like your new order but I also like starting with Confidence because that seems like what your people are looking for and that’s what they’ll see first. In which case you’d be back to your initial order! Sit with both and see what feels right to you. The only thing about the puctuation is when…Read More

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