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4 Emails – book a call — Would love your feedback pls!!! (my ideal clients wants to go from overworked, underpaid business owner -Chief Everything Officer — to a well paid CEO of a well running business machine.) Here you go…..
1) HOOK/SUBJECT line: Working 24/7 and still feel broke?
Preview: let’s chat
Hello first name
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Love Email 2 and 4! For Email 3 I feel like there are 2 opening sentences. Maybe just pick one sentence and focus on what their want is which they don’t have. Like “If you’re not feeling like you know exactly what to do and all your juggling balls are in a line, it may because you’re spending too much time on non-revenue generating activities”.…Read More
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Would you rather take a Business Self-Assessment or a Business Freedom Audit? (my lead magnet) FYI – I help Chief Everything Officers stop getting stuck in the day to day running of their business and step into their true role of Visionary CEO so they can build a self-running biz engine.
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Here’s my first draft — entitled: The CEO who cleaned toilets
There once was a business owner who thought she was a CEO.
She owned a retail store where she did everything…
from bookkeeping, purchasing, selling, making displays, hiring, firing –She even cleaned the toilets!! She was exhausted trying to do everything herself even tho…Read More
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I think this is mostly there overall – I just want to ask – (because I am learning) is the ‘thought reversal’ clear enough? You USED to be the CEO and then needed to focus on your daughter and to your SURPRISE – the business grew – but WHY & HOW – I “think” needs to be addressed – so people can understand how you can help them.
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Can you tie this back to toilets? After all, you started your business for freedom, even if you are not the one currently cleaning the toilets like I was! Let’s partner together and build your self-running business engine.
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Thank you to everyone for your wonderful feedback. Please keep it coming.
If anyone has preferences for the top 4, please let me know.This idea comes from somatic movement – 1st you have to yield (relax) to gather your resources and push/stretch to an action or goal
Topic- Stress & tension limit your ability to move…Read More
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@bodymindhypnoticgmail-com 1, 3, 4, and 5 are compelling to me. They seem to be a different angle than what I hear around these topics. and I know you going in depth on each of these and shedding light will make them even more powerful!
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This idea comes from somatic movement – 1st you have to yield (relax) to gather your resources and push/stretch to an action or goal. I thought I would get people’s feedback. And I’m thinking about using my recent accident as part of some articles. Might as well try and make lemonade. 🙂
Topic- why relaxation is so important to moving…Read More
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Love this. There is an expression in recovery “don’t just sit there, do nothing” which I love. Or as my parter’s uncle who is a doctor is prone to say…”sometimes you have to go slow to go fast” (usually related to healing)
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Love this Joel, also I think :
Relaxing allows room for healing
Often time healing from injury and disease is about connecting to the body-
Thanks, Claire. for these wonderful suggestions. I think we overlap a lot, we should find a time to chat.
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Hi Joel, we definitely overlap 😉 would love to chat. Here is a link to my calendar (I am not sure it includes time difference though but it is a good way to check !), Happy to make it one hour, depending on your schedule.
https://en.anahatalight.com/booking-calendar/appel-d%C3%A9couverte?referral=book_button_widget
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I am pushing you here… working 24/7, hustling on weekends & evenings and yet despite being overworked, you still feel broke – does not bridge over well to #2: Your marketing and content doesn’t position your solution as the BEST solution for your audience.
I know you have better ones to choose from that will speak to the overworked/under p…Read More