I got thrown off by the term “learners.” It suggests that they are already learning. Are you working with those who haven’t yet started learning the German language? I don’t easily pick up languages and I’ve not had great experiences with language teachers. I would want to know that you teach in a fun and supportive manner. That you’ll make it…Read More

I really like the 3rd statement to clients – it feels clear what you do and it feels light.
The 4th client statement – has supportive and support and feels less clear. Maybe something like… “…supportive learning community that upholds values of … ” or “…supportive learning community by offering …. ”
I like the industry statement and of…Read More

Here’s another possibility: I am committed to helping my clients speak German faster and with more confidence by incorporating fun visualization exercises and focusing on conversations.

Your 2nd statement would need the word ‘just’ before the part about kids otherwise it sounds like kids can’t learn the way you teach.

Joel – great job! The two that stand out to me are 3 and 4 for public facing. How do you feel about leading with those two?

so sorry Kerstin, I am traveling, I can met Saturday, MOnday or Tuesday depending on the time

Thank you for organizing @kerstin. I will do my best to get there on time….

I’ll be there, Kerstin. Thanks for organizing!

Hi Joel, Could you give Her a name- would feel more relatable, personal ; Amy came to me because she felt stuck….. I like the strength of this- ask if you need to put in everyones experience is different- fels like it waters this down

I got bogged down in the intro. Read it 3 times and I’m still not sure what it says. Do you need the energetically in the second sentence – You are unconsciously blocked by past trauma and events.

You are missing “years” from the next sentence, “For over 5,000 [years]. . . And I’m a cynic. When you say that Western science has caught up, it feels…Read More

I really love the work you are doing, Joel. All the up front descriptions feel heavy, though I get why you want to share the detail there. Interested to see any edits you made, if you want to share them!