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I made a pop-up subscription form. Here is a screenshot. This still needs to be corrected by Safrianna’s suggested change.
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Great idea. I love the layout. The third core value doesn’t flow yet. I would take out to be resourceful.
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Would love your brilliance with some assistance with Core Values statements – these for the International Argentine Tango academy. Are they repetitive? Are they in the right direction?? Thoughts and feedback please!
Education
Community
Empowerment
Cultural expansionWe believe that a successful tango academy supports a community and its…Read More
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This is great as is and you can run with it. If you want to take it a level deeper – what else can you say besides “classes, workshops, retreats”. What are 3 steps (that are an experience and can tap into emotion and the results ) that people will go through instead of “classes, workshops, retreats” for your second line about bodies can learn.
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@amymshannonhernandez-com thank you – are there examples of what you mean “3 steps”? Are you saying that I state that we believe in these 3 steps? or words like transformation, growth, discovery, connection?
Because ultimately they want to learn to dance… right? will people wonder if they will??? lol!!!!
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This is terrific.
I would move “We believe in creating dancers not just students.” Maybe as the 2nd statement. It is simple, beautiful & clear.
The learning statement I think can be written in slightly 2 different versions.
1. – We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango. Classes, workshops, retreats, and cultural immersions all ser…Read More-
These are great Suggestions @joel. I like the 1st one best and I wonder about using the word “wonderful” – it feels a little empty…. does it?
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I would change the second one: We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango for practice, growth, improvement and self-expression.
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this is so concise – i love it a lot = thank you…. @kpetersdomingoinformatics-ca
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After a terrific consult, I came up w/ these 3 Core Value Statements. Many Thanks to today’s pod people, Kerstin Peters, Susan Lazar Hart & Ann James
– CONNECTION – I believe that the more our conscious & unconscious connect (align), the better we are able to access the vast array of resources within us
– FLOW – I believe when mind & body w…Read More
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Joel – these are really clear and the fact you got it down to 3 is super impressive!
I like the use of the word align in your connect statement.
Suggested change to RESILIENCY for clarity in reading – I believe in our ability to be resourceful and bounce back, regardless of the curve balls life throws us. This invaluable trait can be m…Read More
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I’m not going to be able to make the call on Wednesday because I’ll be on a plane to warm weather – woohoo!
I wanted to share how I used my commitment statement in my marketing this week.
I’m in the middle of a launch for my program so I created a post and put it on IG and FB. I also sent an email with similar wording but added a little…Read More
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That’s a SUPERB idea. Never would have thought about putting it into pop-up form. Clever.