I like these. question for you: do they even know what tech they need? so are they buying stuff hoping to patch holes but dont’ understand how it works? Also, what about this one (specific for your 200k audience): They should’t be doing ANY of this tech stuff. It’s not making them sales.

these are good. I might make #2 more cexpansive, buying because of a sale, limied time offer or lifetime deal.

I really liked some of the language and it resonated with me, or I could think of people who it would resonate with. The first part stood out: You’ve followed the flow of life…

When I got down to the next part, the first line about having a job, or having had a job that motivates was confusing to me; the rest of this part made a lot of sense.…Read More

I like a lot of this. This 1st paragraph feels a little awkward and center justifying makes my brain wander confused from line to line, unless that is the effect you want I would re-align the lines.

You’ve followed the flow of life
and now want to understand:
* who you are,
* if you’re in the right…Read More

I would get rid of “* you’ve had, or still have, a career, a job that motivated you, responsibilities, you’re a manager, partner, CEO, or have a project, “ I think it’s unneeded & confusing. You could include a note about working with professionals elsewhere if you deem you need it.

And the last bullet point, feels a bit different from the other…Read More

Hi Whitney, these are very valid points for not finishing something. I think there is also a tendency to over-buy/ consume as there are usually plethora of offer on the market and on the internet and SM, we think this one will do the thing and fall into the marketers’ trap when – depending on what you do but that applies to a lot of stuff – we…Read More

Hi Whitney, I am wondering what mistakes people make that lead them to feeling overwhelmed, discouraged, trapped, overcommitted?

Hey Whitney! Can you put a picture in your profile please? A pic of your lovely face? Maria will be at the 3rd wed this month to answer tech/substack quesitons!

Love this. There is an expression in recovery “don’t just sit there, do nothing” which I love. Or as my parter’s uncle who is a doctor is prone to say…”sometimes you have to go slow to go fast” (usually related to healing)

Love this Joel, also I think :
Relaxing allows room for healing
Often time healing from injury and disease is about connecting to the body

What Whitney said – I was also told “Don’t just do something, sit there,” as in take the time to feel into what is happening and allow yourself some space/time before acting, rather than what we are usually pushed to do is “don’t just sit there, do something!”.

mistake 2 is good!

One of the mistakes that I have made is not recognizing my body’s cues or signals that I need to rest or relax. It took me many years to recognize those little cues so that I could sit and do nothing to give my body the time it needed to heal.

what came clearer on who you help, Whitney, in this first week of working on the messaging. It is fun to see what we write one week and how it can be clearer or deeper a week later. ❤️

Claire- is it possible to break this down into 3 sections? I got lost in all the info and what I was joining.

@danlewis, Wow!! I love this!! I love how you share with the reader glimpses into your expertise- contrast, choosing stone to reflect being solid and grounded; the softening of the tangled vines. Love the topics too.

This is really good. Next level feed back here-
Client Story:
Executive Coach Roxanne Hori

NO ONE CARES about a Client Story. You have to give me an attactive headline to get people to read your client stories. What woud you stay to stop my scroll?

@megandougherty I love the simplicity and efficiency of this post. It gets straight to the point and provides immediate value.

I wonder if you could simply this line, “There are a few different ways you can position a podcast on your website and in your sales process to increase your know like and trust factor, shorten sales cycles, and let…Read More

How can we make it more about them – less about you in the last line?
“we’re going to be looking a”
“You will have a chance to see how other businesses have suscessfully impliemnted these three tips to their prodcasts to close more sales.”

Focused on creating newsletter prototype and lead magnet. See post above!