How do you want to talk? Have them reply back to the email? DM you? This last line needs a little clearer CTA: . If you’re ready to work with a consultant who will create your custom technology evaluation and write your recipe to streamline your systems for efficiency, let’s talk.

I like this story a lot! It is a bit long and it made wonder where it was going, but then we got there.

Hey Ann – would love to connect as I’m also on a mission to eradicate burn out – but mine is with small business owners, especially women! Hope to see you on a call – I’ve just joined the Club!

Do you want to be more specific to the women leaders you want to empower?

I sent you a message on FB! Let’s chat soon

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Welcome to the group!

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Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to greet y’all. Im a behind on responding! Let me know If I can ever be. helpful

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I like how you call your discovery call a “possibility consultation.” To me, this gives your process a high-touch, high-end feel. You could almost create a 3-part series that goes over the Naming, Framing, and Playing.

I LOVE everything about this!!!! Where do you live? I want this service! Class Act!

Dan – love the topic. Your subject lines need to be 3-5 words max. 🙂 Consider: Why you need visual charisma. Or Do you have visual charisma?

I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this

Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?

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I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]

She summed i…Read More

Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?