Other than what we discussed in the breakout. This feels really long and duplicating. I got lost in all the information, can you offer the hook, the the problem and offer with less?

Claire – like this a lot! I think to really make this pop you can talk a little bit about what the inner compass is and what the wound healing is. I think this will strengthen the piece and pull people in more.

Liked this, Claire. I second Shannon’s comment. I also get the problem state of confusion and mixed messages around women’s power. Bravo!

What about identifying more of what feminine energy id rather than focusing on masculine energy or what healing looks/feels like?

Instead of: Here is what a client went through – could you say something like “here is what a recent client experienced during our work together” – to tie it more to her work with you?

Hi Dan, I love your story. I was wondering at the beginning how you d use the stepping in front of the camera, and I love, and resonate with what you describe, bringing in your essence, your unique style, your ever evolving, and taking us through your experience 🙂 pitty I am so far away !

Dan – great start. I think I would love to see a more personalized CTA here that positions your unique approach. Something maybe like this: Are you a coach, consultant or transformational leader committed to being boldly visible in service of sharing your gifts with your right-fit clients? Would you like to share the full essence of who you are in…Read More

Very engaging and then your invitation to action dropped off. As usual Shannons is on point to complete your captivating beginning.

You have already shared this, correct?

What part specifically would you like feedback on?

I’m not sure if this is something you talk about in your work, but what about a result of your teens becoming more independent? For example – managing their own homework, courseload, schedule etc. Maybe that falls under resilience, but I know many parents who feel like they can’t get their teen to take ownership of things. On another note – I am…Read More

one question. do your parents say they want help with their parenting skills? If not, rework this line:
It’s okay, take a breath- I’m here to help you calm your nerves, boost your confidence as a parent, all while helping your child get on the right track to more positive social thinking skills in 4 weeks.

Many parents of young children delay seeking outside social skills support for their child for a couple of reasons –
-valid reasons too! how about for valid reasons.

I love the picture you painted. Great job! My question is – what age children is the group for? Elementary? Teens? I can tell it’s for younger children but maybe specifying age will help people to self identify with it more.

I like the content; it’s incredibly valuable and is things that I have never considered before with positioning my photos. My question is, where or how are you going to use this content? For me, it reads like a blog or an article. It feels a skootch too long for a single social media post, but I could definitely see it as a series of posts by…Read More

You really like this theme! Here is my challenge for you. How can you use your Live/In-person content personality more?

Always keep flowing with what has worked.
Can you plug any of the pieces from any of the frameworks into something that has worked to shine more light?

I love the way you explained that it’s the connection between the partners is more important than memorizing the steps. When the connection is there and you are listening to their movements, the steps will come. Fabulous!

Will you re-post this video now that you have practiced and can you add a little more detail of the feeling/emotion that creates that connection between partners?