@ruthviolincox-net love this! I do think that if you said this in line one in first set it would help frame “beyond music”: More confidence trying out new skills and activities (even beyond music). thoughts?

Some of the language felt like it was taking away from the emotional content of a beautiful story. Either there was a bit too much of a set-up or other verbiage that was creating distance of something akin to speaking as a 3rd person/observer.
(“I was seeing myself drowning…” is very different from ‘I was drowning…’)
(“I had had that amazing…Read More

Beautiful story! I have a few questions:
What are the details of the going deeper in your own practice that produced the clear energy shift?
What do you mean by having found your home? This sounds like a literal, physical home but I don’t see how that connects to the paragraph above.

Either way, more details would help me understand how you got…Read More

Have a safe move. We will see you in July and you can always come back to your turning point story ❤️

This is so inviting and told very well! Your messaging has grown so much. Where do you plan on sharing this story knowing you are in a more quiet space?

Brilliant, beautiful story!

This works well for your website and social posts. I do think it lacks emotion. The only emotion is the burnout.
You mention Joy and simplicity of being on the road, but you haven’t painted a true picture of what that looks like. You are just telling me, which makes it impossible for me to actually see. That last sentence needs more, otherwise…Read More

I like all the travel and adventure language (running on fumes/empty, climb, brink, etc.) I agree with Amy about wanting more details on the sunny side of things.

The second paragraph of your post (starting with “But”) might read “But after 18 months of working from home, I was running on empty. I found myself back where I started, on the brink…Read More

This is obviously not the whole thing, and it’s already long. Maybe publish as a serial? The thought of a series of videos about this topic makes my stomach churn. Maybe I’ll be ready for it after I post the other videos that have been queuing up for CPC!

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Great story–I feel your ups and downs! Love the ending.

I see some themes coming through this story. Way to go in getting it all down. If you focus on “time” and “building a foundation” – how can that relate to the work you do with your clients?

Is teaching Tango something you love to do, or is it a job? is there something else that you want to do that will bring more joy? Does it truly matter whether you got there through internal or external circumstances? Maybe the internal signals were blocked by everything that was going on. Maybe other stuff didn’t work out because your heart wasn’t…Read More

I see what you mean with intrinsic and extrasinc. and I am nor sure it matters for that purpose. I d love to see a bit more of your background : what were you doing before, why did you have enough ? What is tango for you ?
Reading your story also makes me say that there is something, at some point, even tiny, that shows us the way (or actually,…Read More

I feel like your point of no return is that moment when you decided that you couldn’t teach at 5 locations anymore.. how long did you do that for before you made that decision??? Did you decide on your own to simplify to 2 locations 1 schedule? what does that entail? Did you already know your like-minded instructor who you hired to help? and you…Read More

I like this a lot. Does “at this time…” describe pre-Covid or during Covid?
You might consider turning up the emotion a bit.
Examples:
– Between the long drives & the large number of students, I was struggling & frustrated, I didn’t feel I was able to give my students the attention they deserve. After a lot of thought and a hell of a lot of…Read More