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I made a pop-up subscription form. Here is a screenshot. This still needs to be corrected by Safrianna’s suggested change.
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Great idea. I love the layout. The third core value doesn’t flow yet. I would take out to be resourceful.
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Would love your brilliance with some assistance with Core Values statements – these for the International Argentine Tango academy. Are they repetitive? Are they in the right direction?? Thoughts and feedback please!
Education
Community
Empowerment
Cultural expansionWe believe that a successful tango academy supports a community and its…Read More
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This is great as is and you can run with it. If you want to take it a level deeper – what else can you say besides “classes, workshops, retreats”. What are 3 steps (that are an experience and can tap into emotion and the results ) that people will go through instead of “classes, workshops, retreats” for your second line about bodies can learn.
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@amymshannonhernandez-com thank you – are there examples of what you mean “3 steps”? Are you saying that I state that we believe in these 3 steps? or words like transformation, growth, discovery, connection?
Because ultimately they want to learn to dance… right? will people wonder if they will??? lol!!!!
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This is terrific.
I would move “We believe in creating dancers not just students.” Maybe as the 2nd statement. It is simple, beautiful & clear.
The learning statement I think can be written in slightly 2 different versions.
1. – We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango. Classes, workshops, retreats, and cultural immersions all ser…Read More-
These are great Suggestions @joel. I like the 1st one best and I wonder about using the word “wonderful” – it feels a little empty…. does it?
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I would change the second one: We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango for practice, growth, improvement and self-expression.
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this is so concise – i love it a lot = thank you…. @kpetersdomingoinformatics-ca
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I need to create a landing page for my 3 month virtual “Breathe to Heal” program my Monday (Ack!). Is there anyone who might have time tomorrow to help me? I’d be beyond grateful.
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After a terrific consult, I came up w/ these 3 Core Value Statements. Many Thanks to today’s pod people, Kerstin Peters, Susan Lazar Hart & Ann James
– CONNECTION – I believe that the more our conscious & unconscious connect (align), the better we are able to access the vast array of resources within us
– FLOW – I believe when mind & body w…Read More
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Joel – these are really clear and the fact you got it down to 3 is super impressive!
I like the use of the word align in your connect statement.
Suggested change to RESILIENCY for clarity in reading – I believe in our ability to be resourceful and bounce back, regardless of the curve balls life throws us. This invaluable trait can be m…Read More
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Introduction
Hey everyone! I’m Safrianna Lughna and this is my first post here in the Content Personality Club. I am so happy to have met Shannon and Amy in 2022, and to have the opportunity to work with them and all of you in building my brand through this club! I can’t wait to offer others feedback as well.
I’m here in 2023 with much more…Read More
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Safrianna, I think this looks really good. I’m not sure how someone will find your website, or what portion they will glance at. At this moment, the only thing I might invite you to consider is among the Core Values I would re-iterate who your community is, &/or who you are supporting “allies and members of the LGBTQIA+ community”.
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Transformation: Because we believe that everyone has the inner ability to change what they do not like about their life!
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This is a great start and something you can run with. To go a layer deeper – anytime you say “everyone” or “anybody” – I can’t picture a single person to send to you. Can you get clearer with some identifiers? (there is a training that is titled: Bold Identifiers that you can do to help you get some ideas)
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Have not found that training yet. Yes I agree it is generic and I am struggling with identifying a certain group. For example I work with young wives, students, caregivers, etc.
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BRConservatory core values
We believe in…
EASE: Music learning can be approachable, pain-free, and joyful.
EXPRESSION: You have something to say and music is a beautiful and fun way to say it.
MASTERY: The technical aspect of music is learnable. The spirit is already in you–we’ll [give you the tools to translate it through your voice/instrument…Read More-
I love the Core Value statements for EASE & EXPRESSION.
The MASTERY statement feels off. Why aren’t all skills something that people deserve to excel at?
I think there is a better way to say this or something else that wants to be expressed.
Not sure this isn’t repetitive or long (there might be better words to use). MASTERY: Music is a…Read More -
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I am confused on what the “Not Methods” means in: We teach students (not methods) with kindness, honesty, and creativity.
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Ah, right! I mean we don’t teach a specific methodology or system (like the Suzuki method) at the expense of the student. I’ll work on that language.
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Is this better? CONNECTION: We create customizable learning plans (?) for each student using kindness, honesty, and innovation.
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That’s a SUPERB idea. Never would have thought about putting it into pop-up form. Clever.