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    JoelElfman

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    I made a pop-up subscription form. Here is a screenshot. This still needs to be corrected by Safrianna’s suggested change.

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      Brenda Uekert
      2 years, 11 months ago

      That’s a SUPERB idea. Never would have thought about putting it into pop-up form. Clever.

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Unfortunately, I can’t take credit for it. I believe it was mentioned in TCE, CPC or in a pod conversation. 🙂

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      SandyTownsend
      2 years, 11 months ago

      I love that!

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 11 months ago

        I’ve created it in MailChimp, but once it’s saved, I can’t find it. I’m getting tired enough of MailChimp’s quirks, I may look to switch to another provider.

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      KerstinPeters
      2 years, 11 months ago

      Great idea. I love the layout. The third core value doesn’t flow yet. I would take out to be resourceful.

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Thanks Kerstin

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      Susanlazar hart
      2 years, 11 months ago

      love the layout and the clarity, I agree with Kerstin

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      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years, 10 months ago

      love the layout (mailchimp makes me nuts too)… agree with the others…

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      Shannon
      2 years, 10 months ago

      Joel – what a GREAT WAY TO SHOWCASE YOUR VALUES! so clever – and I love them all!

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 10 months ago

        Thank you, Shannon! This was inspired by something you mentioned during training.

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      AnnJames
      2 years, 10 months ago

      Love it and may try this for myself using Convertkit

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      SafriannaLughna
      2 years, 10 months ago

      Love the way you are showcasing this!

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    DanielaBorgialli

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    Would love your brilliance with some assistance with Core Values statements – these for the International Argentine Tango academy. Are they repetitive? Are they in the right direction?? Thoughts and feedback please!

    Education
    Community
    Empowerment
    Cultural expansion

    We believe that a successful tango academy supports a community and its…Read More

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      AmyHager
      2 years, 11 months ago

      This is great as is and you can run with it. If you want to take it a level deeper – what else can you say besides “classes, workshops, retreats”. What are 3 steps (that are an experience and can tap into emotion and the results ) that people will go through instead of “classes, workshops, retreats” for your second line about bodies can learn.

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        DanielaBorgialli
        2 years, 10 months ago

        @amymshannonhernandez-com thank you – are there examples of what you mean “3 steps”? Are you saying that I state that we believe in these 3 steps? or words like transformation, growth, discovery, connection?
        Because ultimately they want to learn to dance… right? will people wonder if they will??? lol!!!!

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        DanielaBorgialli
        2 years, 10 months ago

        or something like this do you mean: We believe that a successful tango academy supports a community and its journey of discovery, growth, expansion, and connection.

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      JoelElfman
      2 years, 11 months ago

      This is terrific.

      I would move “We believe in creating dancers not just students.” Maybe as the 2nd statement. It is simple, beautiful & clear.

      The learning statement I think can be written in slightly 2 different versions.
      1. – We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango. Classes, workshops, retreats, and cultural immersions all ser…Read More

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        DanielaBorgialli
        2 years, 10 months ago

        These are great Suggestions @joel. I like the 1st one best and I wonder about using the word “wonderful” – it feels a little empty…. does it?

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          JoelElfman
          2 years, 10 months ago

          Maybe, I wanted some descriptor to give it a little more flavor. You could use “joyful”, some other word, or leave it as is.

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      KerstinPeters
      2 years, 11 months ago

      I would change the second one: We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango for practice, growth, improvement and self-expression.

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        DanielaBorgialli
        2 years, 10 months ago

        this is so concise – i love it a lot = thank you…. @kpetersdomingoinformatics-ca

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    MeganCallus

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    I need to create a landing page for my 3 month virtual “Breathe to Heal” program my Monday (Ack!). Is there anyone who might have time tomorrow to help me? I’d be beyond grateful.

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      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years, 11 months ago

      i’m sorry megan I missed – I drove 16+hrs and would not have been helpful.. hope you got the support you need…

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      JoelElfman
      2 years, 11 months ago

      Hi Megan, sorry I missed your note.

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    JoelElfman

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    After a terrific consult, I came up w/ these 3 Core Value Statements. Many Thanks to today’s pod people, Kerstin Peters, Susan Lazar Hart & Ann James

    – CONNECTION – I believe that the more our conscious & unconscious connect (align), the better we are able to access the vast array of resources within us

    – FLOW – I believe when mind & body w…Read More

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      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years, 11 months ago

      I love these! So clear! wow..

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        RuthRoland
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Beautiful.

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Thank you Daniela! Thank you Ruth!

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      SafriannaLughna
      2 years, 11 months ago

      Joel – these are really clear and the fact you got it down to 3 is super impressive!

      I like the use of the word align in your connect statement.

      Suggested change to RESILIENCY for clarity in reading – I believe in our ability to be resourceful and bounce back, regardless of the curve balls life throws us. This invaluable trait can be m…Read More

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        JoelElfman
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Thank you Safrianna, great rewrite. And you just gave me a high-level problem because a friend & I just spent a couple of hours w/ a difficult photo/text editor. Now I am going to have to go in again, and plug in your lovely suggestion. 🙂

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    SafriannaLughna

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    ❤️Introduction❤️

    Hey everyone! I’m Safrianna Lughna and this is my first post here in the Content Personality Club. I am so happy to have met Shannon and Amy in 2022, and to have the opportunity to work with them and all of you in building my brand through this club! I can’t wait to offer others feedback as well.

    I’m here in 2023 with much more…Read More

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      JoelElfman
      2 years, 11 months ago

      Safrianna, I think this looks really good. I’m not sure how someone will find your website, or what portion they will glance at. At this moment, the only thing I might invite you to consider is among the Core Values I would re-iterate who your community is, &/or who you are supporting “allies and members of the LGBTQIA+ community”.

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        SafriannaLughna
        2 years, 10 months ago

        Thank you! We’re trying to figure out how to be inclusive without being exclusive. We want to ensure that allies know they are just as welcome in our community space as LGBTQIA+ people, so I will try and figure out where to put it for clarity!

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    MonicaDunnagan

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    Transformation: Because we believe that everyone has the inner ability to change what they do not like about their life!

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      AmyHager
      2 years, 11 months ago

      This is a great start and something you can run with. To go a layer deeper – anytime you say “everyone” or “anybody” – I can’t picture a single person to send to you. Can you get clearer with some identifiers? (there is a training that is titled: Bold Identifiers that you can do to help you get some ideas)

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        MonicaDunnagan
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Have not found that training yet. Yes I agree it is generic and I am struggling with identifying a certain group. For example I work with young wives, students, caregivers, etc.

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          RuthRoland
          2 years, 10 months ago

          How about “you have the ability” instead of “everyone”?

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            MonicaDunnagan
            2 years, 10 months ago

            I like that

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    MonicaDunnagan

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    I am in!

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      Shannon
      2 years, 10 months ago

      welcome!

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    RuthRoland

    • 2 years, 11 months ago

    BRConservatory core values
    We believe in…
    EASE: Music learning can be approachable, pain-free, and joyful.
    EXPRESSION: You have something to say and music is a beautiful and fun way to say it.
    MASTERY: The technical aspect of music is learnable. The spirit is already in you–we’ll [give you the tools to translate it through your voice/instrument…Read More

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      RuthRoland
      2 years, 11 months ago

      @amymshannonhernandez-com

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      JoelElfman
      2 years, 11 months ago

      I love the Core Value statements for EASE & EXPRESSION.
      The MASTERY statement feels off. Why aren’t all skills something that people deserve to excel at?
      I think there is a better way to say this or something else that wants to be expressed.
      Not sure this isn’t repetitive or long (there might be better words to use). MASTERY: Music is a…Read More

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        RuthRoland
        2 years, 11 months ago

        All this! Wonderful. Will brainstorm a little more and let it simmer overnight.

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      DanielaBorgialli
      2 years, 11 months ago

      These are great! I feel that in Stewardship – you don’t need to state “when possible”.

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        RuthRoland
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Right–thanks!

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      AmyHager
      2 years, 11 months ago

      I am confused on what the “Not Methods” means in: We teach students (not methods) with kindness, honesty, and creativity.

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        RuthRoland
        2 years, 11 months ago

        Ah, right! I mean we don’t teach a specific methodology or system (like the Suzuki method) at the expense of the student. I’ll work on that language.

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          RuthRoland
          2 years, 11 months ago

          Is this better? CONNECTION: We create customizable learning plans (?) for each student using kindness, honesty, and innovation.

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            RuthRoland
            2 years, 11 months ago

            OR– CONNECTION: We encourage [or a firmer word like guide or lead] individuals to achieve their goals using kindness, honesty, and creativity. [Do I add details about parents being able to observe their children’s lessons, all our teachers having gone through background checks, etc.?]

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