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    MariaHernandez changed their profile picture

    • 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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    ThiaPierson

    • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    Hi,
    I created a couple of info-graphics. I one feel good about (not great but ok), the other I am a bit iffy on. Using for landing page and social media posting.

    Any input would be wonderful.
    thanks,
    Thia
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    CarrieWulf

    • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    I tried to follow the email trust triad with this one. I appreciate any and all feedback!

    Differentiator:
    The SPARK Assessment is tailored to each business owner and goes deep to ensure their tech ecosystem aligns with their business goals. We meet the business owner where they are and leave the cookie cutters in the kitchen…Read More

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      AmyHager
      1 month, 3 weeks ago

      How do you want to talk? Have them reply back to the email? DM you? This last line needs a little clearer CTA: . If you’re ready to work with a consultant who will create your custom technology evaluation and write your recipe to streamline your systems for efficiency, let’s talk.

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        CarrieWulf
        1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Gotcha. Thanks! I updated the last paragraph to this:
        I want them to experience that ooey, gooey, yummy cookie that was made just for them. If you’re ready to work with a consultant who will create your custom technology evaluation and write your recipe to streamline your systems for efficiency, let’s talk. Schedule your coffee and cookie cha…Read More

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      ThiaPierson
      1 month, 3 weeks ago

      I like this story a lot! It is a bit long and it made wonder where it was going, but then we got there.

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    Veronica (Vee) Drake

    • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    1, 2 or 3?

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    Ann Becks

    • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    Updated my Mission, Vision & Purpose (using the module in CPC). Would love your feedback! Thank you!

    PURPOSE: Universal truth: WHY am I in business?

    **Women empowered to live fully, true to themselves, create potent impact in their families, communities, business and the world.

    VISION: the HOW, public facing (on Home Page, in contracts,…Read More

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    Trae & Wyatt Spears is feeling Excited

    • 1 month, 4 weeks ago

    Hey, y’all! We are Trae and Wyatt and we own Ghostlight Marketing Agency. We are SO excited to be a part of the CLUB! Excited to learn all we can and gain lots of new friends. 😀

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    Dan Lewis

    • 2 months ago

    What do I do differently from everyone else.

    Subject line: Visual Charisma: Are your personal brand photos Vogue-ready?

    Are your personal brand photos Vogue-ready?

    Whaaaat??? What are you talking about??? I’m not a model or a celebrity!

    Let me back up.

    I do a lot of thinking about personal brand photography for truly transformational…Read More

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    Veronica (Vee) Drake

    • 2 months ago

    Hey Ladies – would you mind watching this super short promo video for my free group – The intuitive Incubator – I’d love feedback. would you join this?

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    Ann Becks

    • 2 months ago

    DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.

    Women, have you LOST your SELF?

    I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.

    She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔

    But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More

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      Veronica (Vee) Drake
      2 months ago

      I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this

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      Dan Lewis
      2 months ago

      Love this, Ann!
      Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?

      . . . .
      I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]

      She summed i…Read More

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        Ann Becks
        2 months ago

        ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁

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      CarrieWulf
      1 month, 4 weeks ago

      Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?

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    Dan Lewis

    • 2 months ago

    Doesn’t meet the criteria of this month’s topic, but I wanted to share a great client story that demonstrates my expertise. (Show it, don’t tell it!)

    Badassity can come in deceptive packages.

    “I’m just a little old lady that likes to write,” were among the first words out of Sue’s mouth on our brand discovery call.

    True statement –…Read More

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      Ann Becks
      2 months ago

      Dan, this speaks directly to your expertise. The things you draw our attention to, isn’t stuff most of us would notice consciously or know. I found myself going back to the photo to see what I’d missed on my first pass. I also love this line: “Badassity can come in deceptive packages.” 😁 One question… I don’t quite understand what “hard, hard”…Read More

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        Dan Lewis
        2 months ago

        Thanks, Ann! I’m not 100% good on that line in the photo. Sue writes in a genre called “hard science fiction”, meaning it’s grounded in actual science. She’s a stickler for that. I was also looking for a line that would contrast with Sue’s little-old-lady physicality. Thanks for your thoughtful feedback!

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          Ann Becks
          2 months ago

          oh! cool!! And I love the contrast you pointed out… “little old lady” with “hard”.

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      Veronica (Vee) Drake
      2 months ago

      brilliant!

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