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Hi everyone,
Would love any feedback on my post using past experience for thought reversal. Any great ideas for a better title would be greatly appreciated.
Time to challenge assumptions?
As an ex corporate marketer, I am first to admit that I was a snob when it came buying products from a direct sales company. How could they possibly…Read More
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I like that you shared the science behind the product, but I am missing the transition and what you want me to do next.
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yes I need to add that! Thanks for commenting.
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Hello! I’d love some feedback on my lead conversion tool. Here is what I have so far, but I’m struggling.
The idea I have for the resource is an assessment that will help them get clarity as to whether what they are currently using (if anything at all) is suiting their needs and if my solution would be an easier and less overwhelming option. Is…Read More
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@sarasarafins-com I could be your Level 5 client… so here’s my thoughts: “simple” is a word that I love wrt finances.
The thing I’m struggling with now is navigating QuickBooks. Agh. Simplicity and not getting myself “tied in knots” is what I’d be looking for… time saving is a very close second. I think your main content is spot on. The other…Read More-
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Thank you for the feedback!
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I agree with Ann. I love simple. Every year I say I will change but the set up is too overwhelming so i dont and stick with my own system. Being reminded of the time savings in the future would be attractive. However the thought in my head is..every minute spent on analysis is a minute not spent on growing my business so it needs to be quick. Hope…Read More
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Thank you for your feedback!
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Hello CPC Friends!
I’m a newbie here and will be joining you on April 17th. Bios are exercises in choosing a story to tell, so I will choose three things here.
1) I have been working in leadership coaching, writing, and facilitation space for a long time and am zeroing in on my message and work for the last and best 10 years of my work…Read More
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Welcome!
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welcome! i am a newbie too. Hope you are getting some sleep
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I like this a lot! I think your hook could be: Is there a time you had to challenge your own assumptions? And then you go into the story as it is written. I do not see your CTA or transition at the end. what do you want them to do after reading this?