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Here is my draft. I decided to start over because I want to get my Calm & Pets: Storm and Fireworks program out for 4th of July /summer. Some of this was bolded and I can’t figure out how to make it bold here.
I’d love feedback. It may be too long. Thanks!
Hook: Is your pet afraid of storms or fireworks?
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Thanks Dan for your feedback!
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This might be giving away a little too much. Is there anything you feel you can pull back on in V2 that will give them clarity that they need your help?
One suggestion is to replace this phrase: So I created a technique that anyone can quickly
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Thanks, I am cutting a lot and changing that language. Good idea!
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Finally!!! Here’s my lead magnet, with 4 follow-up emails, and the offer. I’m nervous, after lots of work, and any feedback would be gold.
http://www.mysticpowersreview.comAlso, I am thinking of renaming it into Mystic Quiz. It’s more direct, more playful, and more clear. Mystic Powers Review is a mouthful, and I think it will have a harder time…Read More
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@samirselmanovicnycgmail-com hello! I will be diving deep into this with you once you get onboarded in our other program – but for now, I’m thinking the quiz needs to be: Modern Mystic Quiz. I like this a lot – and it’s better than “review”. Thoughts?
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Love it! Also, I was thinking Mystic Leadership Quiz. The one you suggest is for more broad audience, more playful. While MLQ would identify who is this for in terms of my level 5 client, but not that playful and energizing like MMQ.
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Oooh, I like the dynamic justaposition of Modern Mystic!
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Trae & Wyatt Spears is
feeling ExcitedHey, y’all! We are Trae and Wyatt and we own Ghostlight Marketing Agency. We are SO excited to be a part of the CLUB! Excited to learn all we can and gain lots of new friends. 😀
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Welcome!
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Welcome!!
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Welcome to the group!
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Hi!
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Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to greet y’all. Im a behind on responding! Let me know If I can ever be. helpful
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Hey Ladies – would you mind watching this super short promo video for my free group – The intuitive Incubator – I’d love feedback. would you join this?
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Vee, this is FANTASTIC. I love how you define “woo” and share exactly who you’re looking for. Clear. Inviting. Your energy is so welcoming. Love it!
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thank you, Ann. I really appreciate you. If I can ever support you please let me know
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Vee this is amazing! I love your energy and they way you explain everything. Just wish I was older 😅
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awww thank you xoox
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VIDEO is your jam. Great joy Vee. Keep it up.
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I LOVE framing what you do as uniting intellect with intuition.
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DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.
Women, have you LOST your SELF?
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.
She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔
But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More
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I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this
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Vee, I absolutely love how real you are!! 😁
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Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?. . . .
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]She summed i…Read More
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ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁
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Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?
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That’s a great idea. Thanks Carrie!
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Hi, Blair! I like the flow of your piece very much, especially how you note the FEELING of helplessness when your pet is afraid.
The flow is great, but feels like it could be tightened up a bit. (perhaps consolidate the What I discovered and what I figured out sections?
Great work!