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January content : Direct offer with client testimonial
10 spots for a Shamanic Circle to regain your Feminine Power – is it for you ?
A 3 hrs Live workshopWomen often think finding their feminine power is hard, or on the contrary, assume it is inherent to their being, but often have misconception on what it is really.
And I get it,…Read More
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![Profile picture of SaraFins]()
I agree. As a potential participant, I would want to know more of what that entails or means.
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Liked this, Claire. I second Shannon’s comment. I also get the problem state of confusion and mixed messages around women’s power. Bravo!
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What about identifying more of what feminine energy id rather than focusing on masculine energy or what healing looks/feels like?
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![Profile picture of Claire Peltier]()
Thanks Tracy, you are right and I added that yesterday in the breakout room !
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![Profile picture of SaraFins]()
Instead of: Here is what a client went through – could you say something like “here is what a recent client experienced during our work together” – to tie it more to her work with you?
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Thanks Sarah, yes sounds much nicer !
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Direct Offer Content:
Does your tech and systems look a little bit like this? A little bit of a CRM stuck to your online learning platform. And then we toss in a few spreadsheets, an e-commerce storefront with a project management system. Don’t forget your website too!
And somehow, they all have to play nice together and run your b…Read More
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I like this because in your testimony she says ‘in a few months’ which gives people realistic expectations. Great testimony also because she highlights at the end that she has systems that run without her constantly monitoring and speaks to your offer to streamline systems and build better workflows. Nice job!
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where did you find the toy photo? that is so freaking perfect!
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with that testimonial, you don’t have to use it all. Here is how I would rework it to fit this offer and not confuse your reader. AND I have a question – will you be the one traking KPIs, tasks, etc with this offer? If not… ditch this and start with Together “Today, she tracks KPIs, ensures all tasks are completed by my team, has a list of…Read More
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@amymshannonhernandez-com So that’s a little tricky. I have released that client and no longer work with her. I’m not sure if I can/should reword that testimonial to read in the past tense.
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yes you should. It doesn’t have to be word-for-word exact. And, you don’t have to keep everything because it no longer relates to the work you do.
My question for you (and everyone else reading/thinking this) is this testimony actually saying what you need it to say and does it make sense? Right now, Carrie, as written – it is confusing and takes…Read More-
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I don’t handle the implementation and ongoing maintenance/retainer work. I provide them with the audit blueprint and make recommendations for what needs to be restructured and changed. I can manage the change over, but don’t implement.
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So, is this the best quote to use? OR what doesn’t need to be said?
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I love how you painted the picture at the beginning. I could totally see it!
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58 Headlines and Hooks! (after going through Shannon’s list I referenced my own curated list from this newsletter: https://go.creatorhooks.com/signup until I got tired)
1. For music students who are tired of “starting over”
after every holiday break:2. Tired of “starting over” with music lessons
after every holiday break?3. How you…Read More
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For music students who are tired of “starting over” after holiday breaks:
It’s not easy to keep up your chops when on break.
But if you don’t want to backslide, SOMETHING needs to happen.These are things my students tell me:
📆“When I’m out of my normal routine, I don’t know when to practice.”
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Very nice! I like that you will be addressing each of these separately – builds curiosity and the need to keep coming back for more solutions.
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I would say what is. “It’s not easy to keep up your chops when on break.” = “It is usually hard for students to keep up with practice during break because their routine is disrupted”
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Thank you, Amy!
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Keep up your chops over break
without missing the festivities!
“There are always other people around when it’s time to practice.”So you’ve set a time to practice, but when that time comes…
your sister has her stuffed animals lined up on the piano,
your dad is trying to get you to taste his freshly-b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Another great post – this made me laugh!
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Like this hook. “Keep up your chops” is specific and evocative. Focuses on the competence you’ve gained, rather than feelings of guilt and shame for not practicing.
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Claire – like this a lot! I think to really make this pop you can talk a little bit about what the inner compass is and what the wound healing is. I think this will strengthen the piece and pull people in more.