Brenda Uekert

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Here’s my landing page copy draft for a free discovery call with me.

Tame your wild hormones, clear your brain fog, and get your joy and your life back!

If you are tired of feeling like crap, you need to book your Nutrition Game Plan session where we’ll uncover what is preventing you from feeling amazing and the steps you need to take to get f…Read More

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Karen Joy Fritz
2 years, 3 months ago

“Tame your wild hormones” is a how – it’s not something I know I want.

Maybe change up “If you are…” to “Are you…” so the reader seems more engaged and giving you yesses along the way.

Again in the benefits, causing my hormones to behave badly is a how. Foods and habits causing sleeplessness, brain fog, irritability… those are things I…Read More
- Annette Presley
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you , I appreciate your feedback!
  
  Interesting. I think you are the first woman I’ve encountered who isn’t interested in hormones. Now, hormones aren’t actually the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be seeking that so that’s why I use hormones since that is what they complain about. But I can add some symptoms.
  
  I…Read More
DanielaBorgialli
2 years, 3 months ago

Re: “Tame your wild hormones” – i hear what @karen is saying above about it being a “how” and yet – so many of us hear “it’s your hormones” – I think it has become common vernacular for women to blame “everything” on their “hormones”. I like it!!! Maybe it’s at the end – you will help them “tame them”….
- Annette Presley
  2 years, 3 months ago
  
  Yeah, I hear “my hormones” all the time. It’s not actually hormones that are the problem, it’s mineral dysregulation, but no one is going to be looking to balance their minerals. Mineral dysregulation is behind everything.

Shannon
2 years, 2 months ago

Hi Julianne. Remember that people buy with emotions. “focus on dreams/goals” isn’t gonna sell, or at least be painfully hard to sell. So, what do THEY WANT more than anything else?
- JulianneMiller, AFC®
  2 years, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you let me mull this over and put some emotion to what they’re thinking and wanting when they come. I know they want calm, they want peace, they want someone to listen and “hear” them. They want direction, organization, professionalism, resources. Just brainstorming. I’ll reflect on some of this. Get out the juicy burger again 🙂

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