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I just had to share. I did an outcome/result message and so far, I’ve got a 64% conversion rate. This stuff really works!
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I can’t be on both calls today so I’ll be on the Quarterly session instead of this one. Your feedback is appreciated for my outcome/results oriented messaging (I’m not sure how to create a good call to action with this:
Did you know that by being coached through your financial stress you can experience:
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Who has put their content out into the World so we can review it all tomorrow and have a brainstorming session on next leveling your content??
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would love some feedback. Is it compelling?
Here is a key reason your hormones are behaving badly, even though you are eating a healthy diet and taking DIM.
Your minerals are out of whack. You have too much iron and not enough copper.
What do I mean by that?None of us wants to bust our butt at the gym, eat kale, and take a boatload of…Read More
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taking DIM? It’s a powerful story. Not sure you need this at the end – (which are BIG issues costing you time, money, joy, and your sanity). You’ve unearthed those pieces in your story.
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Thanks! I’ll take that out. DIM is a common supplement, but I might need to think of something else to put there.
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instead of taking DIM, you can just mention supplements in general. Plus, DIM & DM are somewhat similar, someone skimming might not pay enough attention.
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Feedback please on my bio for my website. Doing some clean up.
Julianne Miller is an Accredited Financial Counselor who is qualified to help you overcome the stress of living paycheck to paycheck and get you on the path to reach your next goals. She has worked with both sole proprietors and women individually to help them overcome their…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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I’d change it to first person. From “she” to “I”. First sentence – I am an Accredited Financial Counselor who helps women overcome … Make it stronger. Be bolder. What makes you different? Is there some reason you became a financial counselor?
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Very helpful, thank you. I have been trying to lead with Daring lately but didn’t apply that here. I’ll rethink this some. I appreciate the feedback!
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Daring is a good word. Keep it front and center.
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Definitely!
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You just prompted me to update my bio on my website. I’m taking all the reins off. Sharing it in case it inspires you.
I have a box of letters. Old hand-written tear-stained letters written to a dear friend decades ago.
Those letters take me back to a time when I was barely getting by. I wrote about:
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Wow, that’s much more involved than mine. I revamped AND sent it off but it’s still not so involved. I really need to rethink some more. Thank you for your help. Detail, that seems to be the key.
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I’ve had more generic versions, and I’m just laying it all out there now. Whether it’s the best way to go remains to be seen. Do what feels right to you.
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Hi Anette, what happened that you got a 64% conversion rate. Conversion of who to what?