This is great as is and you can run with it. If you want to take it a level deeper – what else can you say besides “classes, workshops, retreats”. What are 3 steps (that are an experience and can tap into emotion and the results ) that people will go through instead of “classes, workshops, retreats” for your second line about bodies can learn.

This is terrific.

I would move “We believe in creating dancers not just students.” Maybe as the 2nd statement. It is simple, beautiful & clear.

The learning statement I think can be written in slightly 2 different versions.
1. – We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango. Classes, workshops, retreats, and cultural immersions all ser…Read More

I would change the second one: We believe that all bodies can learn argentine tango for practice, growth, improvement and self-expression.

I love these! So clear! wow..

Joel – these are really clear and the fact you got it down to 3 is super impressive!

I like the use of the word align in your connect statement.

Suggested change to RESILIENCY for clarity in reading – I believe in our ability to be resourceful and bounce back, regardless of the curve balls life throws us. This invaluable trait can be m…Read More

I’m in!!!

Thank you for organizing

I got thrown off by the term “learners.” It suggests that they are already learning. Are you working with those who haven’t yet started learning the German language? I don’t easily pick up languages and I’ve not had great experiences with language teachers. I would want to know that you teach in a fun and supportive manner. That you’ll make it…Read More

I really like the 3rd statement to clients – it feels clear what you do and it feels light.
The 4th client statement – has supportive and support and feels less clear. Maybe something like… “…supportive learning community that upholds values of … ” or “…supportive learning community by offering …. ”
I like the industry statement and of…Read More

Here’s another possibility: I am committed to helping my clients speak German faster and with more confidence by incorporating fun visualization exercises and focusing on conversations.

Your 2nd statement would need the word ‘just’ before the part about kids otherwise it sounds like kids can’t learn the way you teach.

and I forgot spiritual statement: Argentine Tango is a spiritual practice, as a movement mediation connecting you to yourself, to another and to your community. I am committed to supporting this embodiment practice.