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Updated my Mission, Vision & Purpose (using the module in CPC). Would love your feedback! Thank you!
PURPOSE: Universal truth: WHY am I in business?
**Women empowered to live fully, true to themselves, create potent impact in their families, communities, business and the world.
VISION: the HOW, public facing (on Home Page, in contracts,…Read More
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Hey Ann – would love to connect as I’m also on a mission to eradicate burn out – but mine is with small business owners, especially women! Hope to see you on a call – I’ve just joined the Club!
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@diana-lidstonegmail-com Love to connect with you!! And Welcome to the Club!!
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Do you want to be more specific to the women leaders you want to empower?
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@amymshannonhernandez-com I’ll chat with you about this in our call today!! Thanks for the question.
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I sent you a message on FB! Let’s chat soon
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Trae & Wyatt Spears is
feeling ExcitedHey, y’all! We are Trae and Wyatt and we own Ghostlight Marketing Agency. We are SO excited to be a part of the CLUB! Excited to learn all we can and gain lots of new friends. 😀
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Welcome!
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Welcome!!
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Welcome to the group!
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Hi!
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Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to greet y’all. Im a behind on responding! Let me know If I can ever be. helpful
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What do I do differently from everyone else.
Subject line: Visual Charisma: Are your personal brand photos Vogue-ready?
Are your personal brand photos Vogue-ready?
Whaaaat??? What are you talking about??? I’m not a model or a celebrity!
Let me back up.
I do a lot of thinking about personal brand photography for truly transformational…Read More
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Photo that goes with copy.
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I like how you call your discovery call a “possibility consultation.” To me, this gives your process a high-touch, high-end feel. You could almost create a 3-part series that goes over the Naming, Framing, and Playing.
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Thanks, @carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com! I’m experimenting with some new languaging to see what lands.
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I LOVE everything about this!!!! Where do you live? I want this service! Class Act!
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Thanks, Veronica! I’m in Chicago. Would love to work with you!
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Dan – love the topic. Your subject lines need to be 3-5 words max. 🙂 Consider: Why you need visual charisma. Or Do you have visual charisma?
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Hey Ladies – would you mind watching this super short promo video for my free group – The intuitive Incubator – I’d love feedback. would you join this?
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Vee, this is FANTASTIC. I love how you define “woo” and share exactly who you’re looking for. Clear. Inviting. Your energy is so welcoming. Love it!
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thank you, Ann. I really appreciate you. If I can ever support you please let me know
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Vee this is amazing! I love your energy and they way you explain everything. Just wish I was older 😅
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awww thank you xoox
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VIDEO is your jam. Great joy Vee. Keep it up.
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I LOVE framing what you do as uniting intellect with intuition.
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DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.
Women, have you LOST your SELF?
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.
She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔
But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More
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I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this
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Vee, I absolutely love how real you are!! 😁
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Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?. . . .
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]She summed i…Read More
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ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁
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Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?
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That’s a great idea. Thanks Carrie!
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Doesn’t meet the criteria of this month’s topic, but I wanted to share a great client story that demonstrates my expertise. (Show it, don’t tell it!)
Badassity can come in deceptive packages.
“I’m just a little old lady that likes to write,” were among the first words out of Sue’s mouth on our brand discovery call.
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Dan, this speaks directly to your expertise. The things you draw our attention to, isn’t stuff most of us would notice consciously or know. I found myself going back to the photo to see what I’d missed on my first pass. I also love this line: “Badassity can come in deceptive packages.” 😁 One question… I don’t quite understand what “hard, hard”…Read More
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Thanks, Ann! I’m not 100% good on that line in the photo. Sue writes in a genre called “hard science fiction”, meaning it’s grounded in actual science. She’s a stickler for that. I was also looking for a line that would contrast with Sue’s little-old-lady physicality. Thanks for your thoughtful feedback!
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oh! cool!! And I love the contrast you pointed out… “little old lady” with “hard”.
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brilliant!
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Thanks, Veronica!
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I need some feedback, please..
this is my new homepage/lead magnet. Please let me know this speaks to you
The Intuitive Incubator for Women Business Owners.
Where Networking and Masterminding Unite!Welcome to The Intuitive Incubator a group specifically for women business owners who are a lil bit woo and recognize the importance of…Read More
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Veronica, I love this: The Intuitive Incubator for Women Business Owners. Where Networking and Masterminding Unite! It sounds “juicy”, intriguing.
And this is super clear:
Welcome to The Intuitive Incubator a group specifically for women business owners who are a lil bit woo and recognize the importance of spirituality and intuition when it…Read More-
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photo just here for fun
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😂 got it!
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@vdrake123gmail-com — super clear copy and tells me who it is for and what they will experience. I’d love an invite!
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Differentiator:
SPARK streamlines your tech and processes to increase your capacity to contribute to social impact programs, and support causes you are passionate about.Subject Line: I just wanted you to know… (85% on monster insights headline optimizer)
Preview Text: How will you feel in a month?Hey [Name]!
A few months ago, I got a…Read More
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Hey Carrie! One thing I’m curious about is the nature of the decisions she was making that contibuted to her stress? Is it possible to capture how you help impact decisioning making?
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What if I said, “Decision Fatigue – She made so many decisions daily because she didn’t trust her team enough, and analysis paralysis began to creep in.
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@carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – yes great clarifying example here. Great job on this email Carrie!
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Hi everyone, great to join my first call yesterday. I’m starting to think about my email marketing approach and have a couple of things I wanted to ask. 1) Has anyone got a fabulous onboarding email nurture campaign or a template they would be willing to share? I’m looking for inspo! 2) Has anyone in the group moved people from a Linked…Read More
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Hi Anthea! I am not sure if we are able to shift followers from our LI newsletter to one sent from our own CRM. I suppose you could do an email scrape and manually pull their emails from LI, but adding them to your own CRM without them opting in is a bit sketchy since they didn’t agree to be added to your list. BUT you could add a link to optin to…Read More
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Thanks Carrie – yes I like the idea of adding the optin to my LI newsletter.
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LI not my fav. sorry. As for a welcome series Im happy to share mine BUT its very tailored to me and my voice.. interested?
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@antheadreamteamconsulting-ca – hi! Lead people from your LI NL to your email list with an optin, workshop, lead magnet, etc. Let them help each other!
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Hi Veronica,
I like three the best, but they all have great potential. I like #2 as it infers a meditation pose. can you round out the words under it?
Thia