what do you mean by “And, it’s likely taken you a distance in your success.”?

I am getting lost in this too: It takes a toll on you… and frankly, you have other things requiring your time, attention, and desires to fulfill that you’d like to use your energy for, right?

Mindset work involves dealing with your thoughts and beliefs. These exist as part of your nervous system, personality and Ego.

As such, whenever cir…Read More

small tweak: 🔥 Navigating changing your mindset while in a leadership role means there’s a lot of activation, which is where stress arises from. You’re constantly working with your mindset- trying to reset your thoughts and untangle from your beliefs.

This is SOOOO Clear: 💎 What if you could access a part of you that doesn’t change in response to circumstances? A part that remains unchanged even when your whole world feels turned upside down, giving you access to your deepest wisdom.

💎 What if you didn’t need to wrestle with your thoughts and beliefs?

You CAN reconnect with this part of you…Read More

Susan talks about fear and “rocked my world” you talk about hustle and “pulling the rug” – you could tie a little more to the quote. Her last line is SOOOOO good.

Blair, your work tugs my heartstrings. Our sweet dog Benji died Dec 26. What a gift your work is. What is this type of content- Thought Leader with Testimonial? I wonder if you broke up your paragraphs a little it would help some parts to standout a little more? I’d love to see this line as a stand alone: “I would love to help you reconnect to…Read More

intro is still too wide and goes down too many rabbit holes.

For the quote – remove “He is an artist”. The rest of the quote flows very well with the rest of the text

Is the stress of being a leader dragging you down?

This feels like a better theme than stress: learned to speak my truth without the other party feeling attacked or judged.learned to speak my truth without the other party feeling attacked or judged.

Hey, Sara! Great post. You’re really zeroing in on your clients’ problem state. The program I think can be a little more concrete. Right now it kind of reads like it just consists of two calls. Can you spell out a little of what you do and what you help your client to do?

I like it- maybe With Easy Business™ Bookkeeping VIP, includes XXXX and 2 BONUS 1:1 sessions with me, where I guide you through what’s holding you back so you can implement the system seamlessly for your business.

A couple of additional thoughts, Sara:
I think the meta-message (the underlying message of everything you say) is EASE. For instance, I see the word ‘templates’ and I think, oh yeah, that’s what’ll make things easy for me. I want to know more about THAT!
$2k is a big spend for me. I want a little more specificity in what’s included. Like a bullet…Read More

Sara, this feels really clear to me.

This could speak to any business person out there, so there for it doesn’t speak to anyone. A few suggestions, but see if you can get smaller with who you help on this as well.

Are you stuck in overwhelm when it comes to getting your financial information organized so you can file your taxes? And so instead you help a client with their health…Read More

This was clear to me. You identified who this is for, what their struggle is, how your program will help and that for this one time cost your clients gain a system they can use for years.

Great testimonial!

I like how you spaced out the top part. One thing – I’m not sure if you need both of these:
Are your parents aging?
Are you caring for a parent or loved one?

So – I’m here to offer action steps to navigate the emotions of aging parents & caregiving over the next 8 weeks – Here I think you need a word before parents because it feels to me when I read it that you are managing the emotions OF the aging parent and not the emotions of having an aging parent. Does that make sense?

There is a typo here, skill needs an ‘s’: – and gain skill to navigate uncertainty.

Love the last line!