How do you want to talk? Have them reply back to the email? DM you? This last line needs a little clearer CTA: . If you’re ready to work with a consultant who will create your custom technology evaluation and write your recipe to streamline your systems for efficiency, let’s talk.

I like this story a lot! It is a bit long and it made wonder where it was going, but then we got there.

Hey Ann – would love to connect as I’m also on a mission to eradicate burn out – but mine is with small business owners, especially women! Hope to see you on a call – I’ve just joined the Club!

Do you want to be more specific to the women leaders you want to empower?

I sent you a message on FB! Let’s chat soon

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Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to greet y’all. Im a behind on responding! Let me know If I can ever be. helpful

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I like how you call your discovery call a “possibility consultation.” To me, this gives your process a high-touch, high-end feel. You could almost create a 3-part series that goes over the Naming, Framing, and Playing.

I LOVE everything about this!!!! Where do you live? I want this service! Class Act!

Dan – love the topic. Your subject lines need to be 3-5 words max. 🙂 Consider: Why you need visual charisma. Or Do you have visual charisma?

I wish I knew copy better to help you – let me sit with this

Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?

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I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]

She summed i…Read More

Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?

Hey Carrie! One thing I’m curious about is the nature of the decisions she was making that contibuted to her stress? Is it possible to capture how you help impact decisioning making?