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Here’s the Mr. Twinkletoes episode of my podcast, which I mentioned on the call this past week: https://kite.link/CPT65
It’s one of my Creative Pep Talks, which I put out every other week on the podcast. They’re short, off-the-cuff, unedited episodes about a single creative tool or tip. I’ve been doing them for about two and a half years now.
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@norbeckgmail-com – also went to your website – and I have some feedback on that, if you are open to it? Let me know 🙂
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They never expected THIS to hatch out of their egg!
“If an egg is in your nest, you sit on it and keep it warm. It doesn’t matter whose egg it is.” That’s one of the many lines that brought tears to my eyes.
Jeff brought home a copy of P.D. Eastman’s Flap Your Wings from a garage sale when Cole was little. I was excited because I knew of Are Yo…Read More
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@ruthviolincox-net – when I saw this come up on my feed I smiled. Once again, same feedback as before – this is GREAT story telling and insight and example. How does it relate to music or instruments. I think bridging the gap will make it even stronger.
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Hooks
Van Gogh’s Electrified Face Stopped Me Cold
Has a work of art ever stopped you dead in your tracks?
Have you ever been surprised by joy?
Ever been blind-sided by a work of art?
Ever been mugged by a painting?
Vincent Van Gogh mugged me in broad daylight.
Dare to be vivid.Van Gogh’s Electrified Face
The first painting of the Van Gogh…Read More-
@danbadassity-com – these are my two favorite hooks – way to brainstorm MANY and get the ideas flowing: Ever been mugged by a painting?
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@danbadassity-com – as far as the content goes, I loved the entire thing – minus the 2nd paragraph- I actually got lost there, and probably would have not kept reading. But if you take that out, I think it still flows very well and gets the point across. I also wan tot share that there is a way to transiton to the CTA that will really tie it all…Read More
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Posted this revision on LinkedIn today:
Ever been mugged by a work of art?
A couple of weeks ago I went to Chicago’s Art Institute to take in a Van Gogh exhibition. The first painting, a self-portrait, stopped me cold and just wouldn’t let me pass.
Van Gogh’s face was charged, vibrating, buzzing with luminous energy. Each whisker of his…Read More
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Direct offer – first draft
I inserted some introductory, positioning copy in the first section. A challenge I’m wrestling with is that I’m more than a photographer; I’m a coach and consultant as well to get the results I get.Step 1: What is your direct offer? We want you to be selling NOW!
SELL: First Impression Basic Personal Brand…Read More
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@danbadassity-com – the clarity here is great for all section. I am getting hung up on the package title – which is quite long: First Impression Basic Personal Brand Portfolio Package . Titles matter a lot to selling things – think about it like this – what is the result of working with you? Can we rework this title package. For example, we have a…Read More
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Hi, Shannon! I’ve taken a swing at rewriting all my “packages” and giving them more concise names. The challenge is to make each package of services immediately graspable, but also that there’s a progression of fullness. Would you take a look? Thanks!
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Hey everyone! I took a stab at writing an email with the behind the scenes content and I’d love some feedback. I am not sure exactly how to tie in the CTA. I feel like it kind of sneaks up on you and needs a better transition. The topic is Travel and the hook is a question. Thanks!
Here is the email:
Title: How can getting your finances…Read More
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Thanks for sharing your love of travel, Sara. I love to travel too! May I make two suggestions?
Get specific and sensory. It’s the little details that spark engagement and presence you. Today I’m thinking back to a trip to Venice we made on our honeymoon. I remember the heat and the orange glow of the molten glass in the glass-blowing workshop on…Read More -
I see how you feel you have dumped all the engagement at the end. What if you sprinkle it throughout and bold it so people see it.
Title: How can getting your finances organized free you from FOMO?I’m not sure if you know this about me, but I love to travel. I do it any chance that I get. From a weekend spa getaway to a trip to a new city – I’m…Read More
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So… I have been thinking about the AMA format. The idea we looked at on the last call was about finding time for your creative pursuits, and while folks on the call loved it, I’m just convinced it works.
The reason I’m not convinced it makes sense is that the answer is really simple, and pretty much always going to be the same, with only…Read More
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Honestly, I think either works. If you’re nervous about it getting out of hand, choose the second topic. In my experience (based on mostly other peoples AMAs since I’ve only done one–but that one fit the pattern) people don’t pay as much attention to the topic as we think they will.
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First draft of Bold Qualifiers. I’m a personal branding photographer and consultant, and this is for my base package.
First Impression Personal Branding and Signature Images Package (still revising the name)
Are you a coach, consultant or other transformational leader committed to growing your online authority and emotional connection with your…Read More
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Are you a coach, consultant or transformational leader committed to growing your online authority?
Do you desire to connect more deeply with your ideal clients?
Are you committed to being boldly visible in service of sharing your gifts with your right-fit clients?
Are you ready to get vulnerable and playful so you can claim your most unique,…Read More
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Here is the last of the videos I shot pre-Ask Me Anything. Time to work on new content. 🙂 https://www.facebook.com/joel.elfman1/videos/1680492855753363
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Hi @bodymindhypnoticgmail-com, I’m confused. So if this is an ask me anything post, it does’t follow the structure and you have a call to action in the video that is murky + a call to action in the text that is asking people to drop a video (but not sure what of) and then the format was to have them ASK you quesitons about this.
Here is your…Read More
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Hi Shannon,
Thank you for your note. Your thoughts are always appreciated.
My apologies for my lack of clarity, when I said “this was the last of the videos I shot pre-Ask Me Anything”. I shot 3 videos before we started the Ask-Me-Anything series. One of them I re-did in the Ask-Me-Anything format, and thank you for your kind comments on tha…Read More
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And the idea of asking for videos showing how people do their own unique versions of Confidence came from what I thought was a wonderful suggestion from Amy during one of the August sessions. I ran w/ it, even though the video & written requests don’t match up. I’m trying to loossen up my must-be-perfect vs. my get-it-done sides. LOL
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Hey @bodymindhypnoticgmail-com – no appologies need and no worries at all. 🙂 I was just confused on trying to give the feedback, I didn’t understand (or missed it) that you had started before. I love that you are letting go of the must be perfect – yay! Keep up the great content creation.
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Hi Shannon,
Thank you. you for the encouragement. I am much more comfortable putting out content, and I could not have done that w/o the two of you.I should have been clearer about intent, and what format I was using, especially if not AMA (last month’s topic). It is hard for you to give dadvice if I am not clear on what help I need or what my…Read More
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Trying out Bold Qualifiers – for my “Tango Training Class” (which I want to expand beyond tango dancers but those are the people who like it and are coming to it at the moment.)
To get the best results for the “tango training class” you are a person:
who can walk comfortably for 20 minutes
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Here’s my first swing at Core Values!
Badassity Core Brand Values
Full Expression
We believe in supporting, facilitating, and celebrating the growth and full human expression of every individual we touch. To steal a slogan, we want you to be all you can be.Re-Vision
We believe even the greatest idea, the most skillful practice, or the most…Read More-
Reading this the day after, it feels fussy in places. Working on simpler declarative statements. (The statement on Service is a good example.)
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@danbadassity-com – I agree with you – this a good first draft, but wordy. Have you had a chance to get these more concise?
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Next draft is cleaner:
Full Expression
We support the full human expression of each individual we touch. We celebrate the most radiant you.Re-Vision
We believe in continually re-imagining every aspect of what we do to more deeply serve our clients’ bold visibility.Authenticity
We believe in getting real while cultivating the best in us.…Read More
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@norbeckgmail-com – Nancy – such a joy to hear you in action today. I might have a new podcast to tune into. Love that this is off-the cuff, short, and your commentary and insight. love the invitation to be silly and foolish at the end.