Beautiful. How was the engagement? Did you get any takers?

Love this! How does it work? Post the same statement every week? Maybe with a different image?

I am committed to work with you to help you develop your own connection to the universal forces at play in your reality. What does this mean? Can you simplify and streamline without the jargon?

I think that is a fabulous way to use the commitment statement.

Love this!! Great example! Thanks for sharing with us..

Very succinct. I know what you offer and am glad you didn’t add a bunch of “flowery” words to it. Nicely done.

It’s a wonderful set of statements. I would only change one thing – Are you ready to get your numbers in order for 2022 and set up for success in 2023? (it’s shorter, and you’ve already used “business finance” a couple of times).

I got thrown off by the term “learners.” It suggests that they are already learning. Are you working with those who haven’t yet started learning the German language? I don’t easily pick up languages and I’ve not had great experiences with language teachers. I would want to know that you teach in a fun and supportive manner. That you’ll make it…Read More

I really like the 3rd statement to clients – it feels clear what you do and it feels light.
The 4th client statement – has supportive and support and feels less clear. Maybe something like… “…supportive learning community that upholds values of … ” or “…supportive learning community by offering …. ”
I like the industry statement and of…Read More

Here’s another possibility: I am committed to helping my clients speak German faster and with more confidence by incorporating fun visualization exercises and focusing on conversations.

Your 2nd statement would need the word ‘just’ before the part about kids otherwise it sounds like kids can’t learn the way you teach.

What symptoms do your clients have? I love your legacy.

For some reason I can’t respond to you Sara. I will work on it. The problem for me is all disease has one root. People just manifest from that one root with different symptoms. I work with women who have hormone issues, depression, anxiety, or infertility. In all of those, it’s the same root cause.

You might consider shorting it for a better flow: I am committed to helping military veterans conquer the battle over their finances to live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve.

Here’s a few more options: I am committed to helping military veterans conquer their finances so they can live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve. or I am committed to helping military veterans take command and control over their finances so they can live THEIR life of freedom they’ve fought for and deserve.

Loaded it onto my main website (About) and landing page.

I posted mine above because I can’t be on this week’s call. I used it in an email to my list (added it to my launch series that is currently going out) and in some SM posts (IG and FB).

and I forgot spiritual statement: Argentine Tango is a spiritual practice, as a movement mediation connecting you to yourself, to another and to your community. I am committed to supporting this embodiment practice.