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Does your tech and systems look a little bit like this? A little bit of a CRM stuck to your online learning platform. And then we toss in a few spreadsheets, an e-commerce storefront with a project management system. Don’t forget your website too!
And somehow, they all have to play nice together and run your b…Read More
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where did you find the toy photo? that is so freaking perfect!
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with that testimonial, you don’t have to use it all. Here is how I would rework it to fit this offer and not confuse your reader. AND I have a question – will you be the one traking KPIs, tasks, etc with this offer? If not… ditch this and start with Together “Today, she tracks KPIs, ensures all tasks are completed by my team, has a list of…Read More
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@amymshannonhernandez-com So that’s a little tricky. I have released that client and no longer work with her. I’m not sure if I can/should reword that testimonial to read in the past tense.
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yes you should. It doesn’t have to be word-for-word exact. And, you don’t have to keep everything because it no longer relates to the work you do.
My question for you (and everyone else reading/thinking this) is this testimony actually saying what you need it to say and does it make sense? Right now, Carrie, as written – it is confusing and takes…Read More-
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I don’t handle the implementation and ongoing maintenance/retainer work. I provide them with the audit blueprint and make recommendations for what needs to be restructured and changed. I can manage the change over, but don’t implement.
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So, is this the best quote to use? OR what doesn’t need to be said?
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I love how you painted the picture at the beginning. I could totally see it!
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If you have missed Inspired Beyond Belief – I had Shannon stream my favorite part into the FB Group. You all need to watch it. Please share your Do | Be | Have goals in the comments of that video.
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ok – so I finally went for it and created an Instagram post for nitty gritty – and the video seems long – good lesson – how to be catchy to the point and shorter!
Let’s see what engagement is like… still not sure I actually captured the essence of the assignment but let’s see…
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I love the way you explained that it’s the connection between the partners is more important than memorizing the steps. When the connection is there and you are listening to their movements, the steps will come. Fabulous!
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Will you re-post this video now that you have practiced and can you add a little more detail of the feeling/emotion that creates that connection between partners?
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Just a reminder, we meet Jan 2nd at 10am ET for Inspired Beyond Belief. The zoom is in your calendars.
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Why learning only steps and patterns fail in dancing Argentine Tango
The reasons you’re not getting the results you want in classes is because you’re focusing on just steps and patterns.
The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and conne…Read More
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I think this is great, Can you write it how you would post it? I feel like you are still sharing a draft/notes here.
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This can flow better:
The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection.This is keeping you stuck and from progressing to dancing with better dancers.
Steps and patterns are failing preventing you from dancing with better dancers because you’re neglecting to consider your p…Read More
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I would consider reversing “The steps and patterns fail you because you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection.” to “you’re neglecting to consider your partnered communication and connection, your steps and patterns can fail.”
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I like this because in your testimony she says ‘in a few months’ which gives people realistic expectations. Great testimony also because she highlights at the end that she has systems that run without her constantly monitoring and speaks to your offer to streamline systems and build better workflows. Nice job!