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Hi everyone – I wanted to drop some content ideas for a landing page for a 10 week course – Moving Motivated Women…
Any ideas or direction are welcome – thank you!#1 what do you want them to buy into?
I want them to buy into a 10 week course – a holistic movement based 10 week course2. Ask what is my audience frustrated…Read More
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Thanks @amymshannonhernandez-com – a little confused – for clarity are you suggesting change how I stated the “wouldn’t it be nice…” sentences to statements revolving around being supported pain free and confident??
Thank you again….
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Lots of great material here. The “Moving” in the title is a bit ambiguous. “Moving” could be related to business, attitude, and personal life. Not sure about the alternative titles just yet. You could do something like “Motivated Women Moving Muscles” which would be more simple & direct. Might not fit if you have a bigger umbrella.
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thanks @joel. It’s really about moving more than muscle – once you start aligning the body other parts start to shift too… this is mind body soul work… 🙂
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Got it. And still “Moving” by itself feels too ambiguous. I’d love to see feedback on this from others. i know it’s way overdone, but to me, “Motivated Women Moving Mind & Body” feels better than leaving it so ambiguous. The other consideration that comes to mind, is that I imagine a Motivated Woman or person wanting clarity or some sense of the…Read More
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hello Everyone! (ok here it goes – Landing Page copy draft 1)
1. Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: eight week course for those with little or no experience dancing.
2. Tired of the day to day grind?
Beginner Argentine Tango course 1: begin your journey to relieve your stress and improve your overall health
Benefits:
* improve your overall…Read More-
I feel like your Number 3 point should actually be your title! There is more excitement in that. My recommendation is to move this “Do you need social interactions? are you bored? do you have zoom fatigue? Then this is the beginning –” to the title
and leave this “Join this Entry level course to Argentine Tango your first step to fun!” as the l…Read More-
Julianne – this is so juicy – and very helpful. I’m going to play some more with it but I really love it! Thank you for that!
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Zoom zone got you feeling bland? Tango your way to feeling grand!
Enter the zesty world of beginning Argentine Tango and dance your way to balance, flexibility, strength, and endurance in a safe environment to laugh with new people. Argentine Tango – your first step to make exercise FUN!
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Great first draft! On the questions, the way to level up your messaging is to get away from the focus of “pain” and look at the future. So, for your questions, I have reworded them.
“wouldn’t it be nice to feel secure, supported, pain free and confident in my body! “ – How does YOUR body feel when you are supported, pain free? Can you imagi…Read More