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DIRECT OFFER POST- love your feedback. Struggling with HOOKS.
Women, have you LOST your SELF?
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in.
She said, “I feel like I’ve lost myself”, and wept. 🥺 Oh, I felt her pain and my heart ached for her. 💔
But this isn’t an unusual e…Read More
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Vee, I absolutely love how real you are!! 😁
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Love this, Ann!
Feels like the immediate jump to losing yourself is a little too abrupt. Perhaps move that line. Does the following work for you?. . . .
I was on a call this morning with a nurse who REALLY wants to stop the cycles of burnout she’s been in. [add a detail or two to make this person and her burnout more concrete.]She summed i…Read More
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ooo, thank you Dan! I appreciate this feedback! And thanks for the badassity link!😁
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Ann – what if you add a testimonial from someone who has experienced a major shift?
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That’s a great idea. Thanks Carrie!
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Differentiator:
SPARK streamlines your tech and processes to increase your capacity to contribute to social impact programs, and support causes you are passionate about.Subject Line: I just wanted you to know… (85% on monster insights headline optimizer)
Preview Text: How will you feel in a month?Hey [Name]!
A few months ago, I got a…Read More
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Hey Carrie! One thing I’m curious about is the nature of the decisions she was making that contibuted to her stress? Is it possible to capture how you help impact decisioning making?
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What if I said, “Decision Fatigue – She made so many decisions daily because she didn’t trust her team enough, and analysis paralysis began to creep in.
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@carriewulfdenprofessionalsolutions-com – yes great clarifying example here. Great job on this email Carrie!
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Have a great couple of weeks and I will be back for week 3. Don’t forget to go to the calendar to get the codes to register for the newsletter workshop March 20 and Lead Magnet workshop in April for free. ❤️
Remember if you post content on the wall, go to the two below your post and read. Ask curious questions if you don’t feel clear when…Read More
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I appreciate your thoughts and feedback!
Topic: Mistakes My Clients Make
Hook for the Social Post:
What would you do with an extra $5k? I trimmed $5,000 in tech waste for a client who didn’t even realize they were losing money. There were so many subscriptions and programs this client was paying for and not using!Title: 5 Ways Your Tech i…Read More
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@vdrake123gmail-com, would love for you to read and provide any questions you have after reading this for Carrie. When you make a post, make sure you go down and read the two posts below yours. Look for points that you get lost or confused and asked questions ❤️
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Small visual tweaks – add numbers next to the 5
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Increased Training and Support Costs: and Scalability Issues: and Increased IT and Maintenance Costs: doesn’t end with a statement of what will the be the result when this is fixed. The other two do, which will make them work well as stand alone posts
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what is the result from investing in your business’s future? at the end, Close that gap to the opening of the piece.
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My first thought was is this for me?? Concrete examples may be impossible but my mind instantly needs tangible. Like I thought of my scheduling platform “talking” to my convertkit.. is that what this is speaking to?? Great job!!
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CONNECT post from this month- mistakes (althought the mistake is buried)… bigger issue is I’ve posted 3 times on SM with different topics and had NO engagement… kinda discouraged.
I’d love some feedback on this post. My niche is burnout in women healthcare professionals. Thank you! @clientsmshannonhernandez-com @amymshannonhernandez-comAre…Read More
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I’m not sure I have the answer on engagement on SM yet…I don’t think people like to READ much there – perhaps doing that as a carousel would help – but for email I like this writing here.
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Thank you Whitney!
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Know that even if someone is not engaging. They are still lurking. You will say something that hits their heart and they will feel seen and reach out. Don’t stop and keep showing up for them – but also yourself. ❤️
I know this isn’t easy, but 3 posts isn’t ‘that many’. You keep getting clearer and clearer as you communicate and stay in…Read More
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