Hey Dan! I like this story, and I can see how it ties directly into the work you do now. For me, it feels like the story from the past takes up more of your email than how it relates to what you do now. Is there a way you can shorten the past story and lengthen how it ties into your current process?

I agree with Carrie’s comment above. I do love how you relate your improv experience to what you do now with photography. It sounds like you do the thinking and set the stage, creating a safe space and a great environment, and all your client has to do is show up and play and be themselves? That sounds SO freeing!…Read More

Thanks, Carrie and Blair! I slept on it, and decided the focus of the piece was off. Here’s my rewrite.

L-O-V-E this

Dan, this speaks directly to your expertise. The things you draw our attention to, isn’t stuff most of us would notice consciously or know. I found myself going back to the photo to see what I’d missed on my first pass. I also love this line: “Badassity can come in deceptive packages.” 😁 One question… I don’t quite understand what “hard, hard”…Read More

brilliant!

Hi Dan, I really like it. it is a very catchy post and made me think of my own headshots. Wow – got it, you ve nailed it ! Pitty I am so far away 😉

A couple of things that came to my mind reading the post,
I think the end is not as strong as the rest of the post and there are a bit too many things

– I would sugget rewording that sentence :…Read More

This connects Dan.